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· A Sticky Conversation

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· Vulnerable Captivity

· The Kite That Would Not Bow

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· Understanding the Unexplainable

· Reality of Another Kind

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· A Jungle-rain Pastorale

· Sediment Within the Soul

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The Ultimate Breath

by Odin odin@aflx.com — Read all 3,869 poems by Odin odin@aflx.com

With so much death in the world, one is compelled to wonder on such a moment. Regardless of one’s belief system, might that split second be the transition to but the next iteration of existence… transcending any supernatural or scientific speculation of what we understand is? (Image by Angela Morrow)

Thursday, January 11, 2018


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The Ultimate Breath

This cadence of a last breath,
This moment to determine
From where one’s final rhythm emanates,
Mirroring childhood,
Adolescence,
Even that much dreaded final curtain of maturity.

Seniorism will parade its swell and gasp,
A Rite of Spring paradox,
Ingested forever,
Becoming the intravenous surge of finality.

Will it have the growing common duplicity,
Able to flow with a flowery resonance,
Or the prickly shrill of cacti,
Knowing life’s survival is akin
to but the proverbial rabbit in the hat?

Will the innate memory of baby breath,
of suckling contentment make silent
intrusive memories of first-love betrayal?

Or…

Might the crackling rock of roll
Make tamboured expansion of racing energy,
Produce a heave,
A final extolling of inhalation well spent.

Oh, how tenuous the choosing,
This last moment,
Finality’s desperate attempt,
One’s ultimate breath.


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Reviewed on January 14, 2018
As a caregiver for a lady and being with her at her last moment with a Hospice Nurse, I was told that what we see as any anguish is the soul fighting to escape the body to the next dimension. She was so comforting. Extremely great writing!

Love ya!

Jane

Reviewed on January 12, 2018
for some time I'm exercising holding my breath to make it deeper, until it reaches my marrow. I just wonder, once I'll be able to hold it for such a long time, could it convert into an ultimate in nature? . . a very realistic piece of art. Cheers, alex


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