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· The Kite That Would Not Bow

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Remembering Twirly Things

by Odin odin@aflx.com — Read all 3,869 poems by Odin odin@aflx.com

Remembering the Foss balance and motion kits in school, for the fortunate the lessons continued to transcend the obvious. (Image by kingwicked)

Sunday, January 14, 2018


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Remembering Twirly Things

Loneliness,
The ever-aware sadness never knowing,
Did stumble about untouched
Awaiting enigma’s shadow
To enter into the light.

Came that special day
It did awaken,
As curled atop summer grass
The young boy made simple discovery.

So unadorned came the moment,
As laying upon his back,
A mere release of breath
Sent dandelion umbrellas afloat,
Their landing a graceful message upon his chest…

“Awaken your heart,”
Did they whisper,
“For challenge awaits
beyond youthful innocence.”

So many years trailed behind,
Where among trampled grasses of trial and error
Memory’s favorite messenger,
This weed of delicate flight,
Remained his companion of conscience,
Childhood’s compassionate gift.

How precious was discovery,
Introduced once as a gently landing twirly thing,
Quietly delivering a weathered warrior called love,
Life's protection for man's vulnerable tenderness within.



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Reviewed on January 17, 2018
You bring back wonderful memories, Odin! Thank you.

Love ya!

Jane

Reviewed by Ronald Hull
Reviewed on January 15, 2018
I think we all tend to remember those warm days when we could lie on our backs and below the white para-sails of dandelion seeds on their merry journey to reseed the neighbors lawn to his disgust.

Now we long for those carefree days when we could do such whimsical things with no regret.

Ron

Reviewed on January 15, 2018
it's such a great move to take this familiar to everyone image of a rolling stone, a pilgrim, as a carrier, . . but the last stanza just knocked me out. So strong and so quiet. Cheers, alex

Reviewed by Budd Nelson
Reviewed on January 14, 2018
I agree these are the simple pleasures that continually reward us in so many ways

Reviewed by John Herlihy
Reviewed on January 14, 2018
It's amazing how such a simple thing, such as a dandelion umbrella, afloat in childhood, can carry us through into adulthood and on into old age where it appears as a symbol of innocence and of hope in the pen of the poet.


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