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The Not Just Yet Continuence

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To some of us, all ends are but preparations for the next beginning. (Sculpture by Christopher David White)

Tuesday, February 20, 2018


Poem Artwork
The “Not Just Yet” Continuance


Peering back at the shadow stretching,
Continuance knows well the peaceful silhouettes from horizon's light,
Ancestral sequence having frequented this shore many times.

All is as it has been
On so many such occasions,
Sequestered driftwood blanketed by sand,
Isolated fingers protruding in protest
Remain unready to move on,
Just yet.

Sandpipers scavenging
Wet bubbles along the beach,
Furtively run zigs and zags,
Avoiding swooping wings overhead,
A termination they too are not ready to embrace
Just yet.

All is as it has been
Even the familiar rumble of distant truck engines
Downshifting for the long pull over the hill,
Carrying essential goods of all kinds,
Sustainment of another kind,
People not at the end,
Just yet.

Destiny laps the shore.
Its gentle hands tugging
Nature's ancient endurance
Into warm waters,
Where this once mighty limbed-strength,
Resistance to wind and temperatures,
Readies again for the next beginning,
but perhaps not
Just yet.

Ahead

White caps thunder applause,
As the elongated shade of remaining branches,
Fading into the day's dusk and disappearing,
Signaling a tide ready to lift,
To carry forth and beyond
The roots that have withered,
Growth's ever changing leaves and bark
Having become enjoined morsels of Nature's love and care,
Whispers from the past mixing peacefully
As ghostly remnants hover not ready to disappear
Just yet. 

Inevitably...

The water rises.
The fiber and strands of resistance
Soften to dissolve into a new connection
As birth's salt and brine prepare the next iteration.
A final surge upward.
A lift of wave and purpose.
Exploding its final power
Into a mist imploring remembrance
Before the oneness of completion
Cycles again into its new inception,
Thus beginning another never-ending completion.

How comforting…

The drifting of a tree we might meet again
Beneath another shore's migrating sands,
Where still further preparation
Begins to unfold one’s essence
Into yet another origin. 

Such is the gift of time,
The requisite condition for continuance,
Where existence once created,
Evolves unfettered in perpetuity,
Anticipating the journey ahead.

But perhaps…

Not just yet.


  


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Reviewed by Ronald Hull
Reviewed on February 21, 2018
This could be a metaphor for the failure of entrenched NRA supported Congress persons (and the president) to fail to act appropriately after ever increasing horrifying accounts of mass killings reaching innocence more and more… "We are praying for the harmed [losers], but 'not just yet' time to talk about…"

But on purely nature's terms, I believe you are referring to nature's ability to blend in and adapt to conditions that seem untenable… mass extinctions.

Ron

Reviewed on February 21, 2018
yes, to wide extent, it's always not enough in all respects of our existence. in restricted sense, to know when to stop is an immense virtue to get which one has to go thru fire and water first. a long gesture with hands and all the other parts of the body called Humanity. . . Cheers, alex

Reviewed by John Herlihy
Reviewed on February 20, 2018
Jane got it right. The images that arise in this poem are stark and full of meaning.

Reviewed on February 20, 2018
The imagery in this poem allowed me to smell the salt in the air, see my shadow, and hear those "distant truck engines", in a memory of long ago. Thank you for this lovely piece of work!

Love ya!

Jane


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