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Books
· Perceptions

· ECHOSIS

· Prosetry at Work

· Said and Unsaid - Vol 1

· 3 WAY MIRROR


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· Patience Waning

· Ladle Lines (A prosetry memory)

· A Gentle Man

· Pacing Love's Journey

· Gratitude

· A Sticky Conversation

· Blazing Now and Then

· Vulnerable Captivity

· The Kite That Would Not Bow

· Time


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· Desperation Breeds Desperation

· Preference Manifest

· Innocent Guilt

· Barbed Isolation

· A Place...

· Sanity's Loss

· Organs Anonymous

· Fatuous Beyond Absurdity

· Truth is One


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· The Life-long Pernicious Evil

· Cherishing Sounds of Silence

· Understanding the Unexplainable

· Reality of Another Kind

· Finding Trust Again

· Aromalicious Memories

· A Jungle-rain Pastorale

· Sediment Within the Soul

· Life's Enormous Green Chest

· Roadkill Memoriam

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Those Twenty Summers Left

by Odin odin@aflx.com — Read all 3,869 poems by Odin odin@aflx.com

Another reflective "growing younger" trilogy needing to be grounded. Yeah, my mate told me two years ago that she was going to kick my ass if I fell short of my 100th birthday. Nice challenge, eh? She reminded me again last year on my 81st. I reminded her of her 38th and climbing upwards that she had a goal too. (Image by pinterest)

Monday, March 5, 2018


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Those Twenty Summers Left

And what is twenty?
Two prints of one's hands in the sand immortalized?

C’mon…

Just a youthful day at the beach,
Forever replanting impressions,
Inviting the tide in,
Patiently awaiting the tide out.

Life revels in creating images,
enigmas,
creative experiments,
the subtext of poetry searching for a grounding.

Perhaps it’s all about innocence kept alive?

Or maybe…

For those who perceive there is no end,
sublime existence awaiting the next beginning.


 


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Reviewed by Ronald Hull
Reviewed on March 6, 2018
Looks like she's going to do everything in her power to make it happen. I am looking at 25, cut short by five years for every time I've banged my head hard… Let's see… About 10 times. So I guess I'm already 25 ahead. ;-)

Since I'm sure there is no more, "other," life, the rest of what I've got is merely sublime and I cherish every minute of it.

Ron

Reviewed on March 6, 2018
Those tides are always washing the slate clean.......I love this! 'Enjoyed much!

Love ya!

Jane

Reviewed by Michael Schafer
Reviewed on March 6, 2018
Hey, George Burns was booked for his 100th birthday. He made it, and I hope you do to.

Reviewed by Richard Cederberg
Reviewed on March 6, 2018
Subtext is something many poets fail to apprehend (or understand) in another writer's work. Far too many habitually blast out a message that the reader is forced to react to. Of course there are times when being blatant, or ranting, is necessary for creative health, IMO. Cleans and frees the synapses and allows for a more subtle message to emerge. That's just my mental processes though. Your piece here is keen, Odin, and the image and subject matter (in confluence) offer the reader a deeper, more personal, application. Well done. r

Reviewed on March 6, 2018
Viva the Poet!

Peace, Courage and Wisdom.

An exquisite ontologic photograph of the subject dealt, "Those Twenty Summers Left" sings with a clear poetic voice.

This certainly stimulates thoughts and discussions; and will create an endless cerebration of life-living. Heraclitus probably would say: "One can get there, if one cares for the next twenty seconds anywhere."

The lesson in the vision created by the lines of "Those Twenty Summers Left" is: One can prepare for her/his hundred twentieth birthday by balancing actions in harmony with healthy thoughts and diet.

In reverent appreciation,

Andre Emmanuel Bendavi ben-YEHU



Reviewed by John Herlihy
Reviewed on March 5, 2018
The image of the tides washing away the years in the sand is an enduring one. You end on a hopeful note.


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