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Asperation's Seduction

by Odin odin@aflx.com — Read all 3,869 poems by Odin odin@aflx.com

The pursuit of success sometimes convinces us to dodge choices, knowing they are causal in nature, creating consequences that become yet further choices. Eventually, some make a decision, knowing not the seductive pattern's entrapment. (Image by Taylor Marie McCormick)

Friday, May 25, 2018


Poem Artwork
Aspiration’s Seduction


We discovered.

There's a location.
We all know it.
Main Street America.
That place where
deals are consummated,
innocents made guilty,
trials courtship shams.

We learned.

This place of early starts,
schools short of everything;
lined paper scarce,
pencils with erasers gone,
full length crayons just history,
once chalk stubs, now nubs,
all while administrators ignore and laugh,
all the way to the bank.

Many of usn tried.

That place of the first job,
first date,
first car,
first seduction.

We tested.

Some found the glitter place
where 3-piece suits
came from Brooks Brothers,
not J.C. Penny,
where 2 martini lunches
boded well with the norm,
trumping struggling year’s
Big Macs and cokes.

We joined.

Where going home
meant driver-driven,
doorman-opened,
gilded elevator ascension,
home of wrap-around glass,
marble floor supported,
sensory-indulgent décor,
programmed delusions,
where only one’s own voice was heard,
mirrored self-image as only reflection,
all while standing atop terraced view.

We looked out.

We looked skyward.

We looked down.

Seeing thirty-eight floors below,
everyday people,
ones making possible this out-of-touch bubble,
this insulated veneer,
the platinum exterior,
arresting the arguable bad dream.

Some of us woke up...

Finally.
Jesus… This all over again?
 


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Reviewed by Ronald Hull
Reviewed on May 26, 2018
I love that image and I love your offering. Once again you describe a course in life. But this time, you describe that course as perhaps, steering in the wrong direction until a course correction is made. Based on your writing, I think you have made the right choice.

Ron

Reviewed on May 26, 2018
Wonderfully penned and thought provoking, Odin. Enjoyed.

Reviewed on May 25, 2018
There are many definitions of success. When you're up on the top looking down, you wonder whether or not you have chosen the right path to be successful. Being successful is how you feel within yourself, and not what you show to others.

Sandie


Reviewed on May 25, 2018
You took me to the era of art deco there for awhile! In answer question with a question................Is it? Damn!

Love ya!

Jane


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