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Adrift

by Odin odin@aflx.com — Read all 3,869 poems by Odin odin@aflx.com

Somewhere in all our species’ heritage there was the need or desire for immigration, usually toward a better life. What happened? (Image by Homer)

Sunday, July 8, 2018


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Adrift


Buried long amidst fear and repression,
a world gazes at television screens in wonder,
so many of like mind,
so many of like purpose,
so many insistent on false freedom.

Why such insistence?

We are not of like mind.

We are not of like purpose...

Yet, far too many remain trapped,
clamorous of membership in the two percent.

Ironically,
the mind,
its purpose,
its freedom,
its health,
rests indubitably void of wealth’s trappings.

Perhaps…

It should be obvious to us,
these foreign country refugees with raw needs and wants,
asking but for simple entitlements of civilized behavior,
most sending messages for all to hear,
that the hope of most aspiring humans
is growth void of repression and hate.

And yet…

Some would sit back and wonder
at our own silence of eruption,
our continued stifling of tremors below,
quashing the need for release.

Alas

For now

The glistening ducts of “civilized behavior”
emit but muted cries down the face of truth,
forming tears of quiet guilt,
even as we rejoice
at the tenacity of another's courage.

To embrace one another,
to see abusive power destroyed,
to build a life imbued with love,
free from degradation and exploitation,
such is the goal of human rights,
the humanistic permission to live freely,
to be whole,
to never know an adrift-feeling again.

 


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Reviewed by Jerry Bolton
Reviewed on July 10, 2018
Ron said it all, I can only give him a thumbs up.

"we would not have to fight over the scraps that are left when some people wish to take it all."

Reviewed on July 9, 2018
I'm with you. I have never seen the hate and bullying in our government as it is now. The division of peoples.........this is all so bizarre! Is this still the United States of America? "North America vs South America.............North Korea vs South Korea! This color doesn't like that color.............imagine that!

Love ya!

Jane

Reviewed by Ronald Hull
Reviewed on July 9, 2018
The world is awash with billions of people in economic distress. Yet there are many countries where life is generally good for everyone. United States cannot absorb all the people who if they could, would board a vessel that would carry them to our shores. We would become, like those countries. Every vestige of our landscape picked clean to bare dirt with nothing left for nourishment.

Yet we cannot be castles on the hill that only let the peasants in during times of war when we need them to carry out our offense/defense with their lives.

If I read your poem correctly, it is a wish for all the people to share in prosperity and good treatment so that we would not have to fight over the scraps that are left when some people wish to take it all.

Ron

Reviewed by Michael Schafer
Reviewed on July 9, 2018
Excellent. We truly need leaders who can unite us, instead of sowing seeds of division, and hate.

Reviewed by Jansen Estrup
Reviewed on July 9, 2018
'Death to privilege' was the motto of Andrew Carnegie and he tried to spread his fortune in a manner which could bring us all closer together ... alas, we don't read much anymore. Well done, Odin! If a hug counts as an embrace, here is one ...


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