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Awareness Awakening

by Odin odin@aflx.com — Read all 3,869 poems by Odin odin@aflx.com

Reflecting on how easy it is to judge, how hard it is at times to just allow… even harder to arrive at a personified understanding. Critical thinking worthy of pursuit. (Painting by Raphael)

Tuesday, July 17, 2018


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Awareness Awakening

From where comes the aha,
The moment of clarity,
The split-second company of epiphany?

So often we peer out
From our myriad base camps,
See little,
Turn our ears,
Hear but noise.

Aha waits patiently…

Even as our curiosity remembers
Tree-line's northern moss
Urging further ascent to higher plateaus,
Fragrance of crystalline air remains at the wait,
Understanding consciousness is winded,
Drawing on exhausted senses,
Seemingly void of spirit,
While languished trust
Continues its struggle
To remember innocence lost.

Aha knows well the journey.

Fate's untimely glacial fields
Give cause to cling tenaciously
To one's layered paralysis,
Wanting to discover,
But fearful of passion's temperature,
That shift in climatic mood
When weeping might begin its purge,
Thawing quickly the resistance,
Releasing sediments of pain and fear
Cascading across layers of record,
Creating escaping tributaries
To merge at lake's shore
Where ebb and tide mingle old and new,
Regrets and glory,
Joy and sorrow,
Freedom's anvil inviting paradox be forged.

Vivid reflections alert one's aura.
Attention is finally paid.

Soaring eagles share strident cries.
Languid frogs croak their humorous jest.
One is dared to jump
As Sun's rays warm decision.
Moon's glow bathes hesitance
Readying the calm of wisdom.

Revelation offers its purity of breath
Enabling a sudden exhale,
Cold's numbness condenses,
Evaporating into enigmatic
Cacophonous voices of the quiet,
Life's precarious scale
Righting the balance.

And then…

That rarity of rarities,
The tomorrows of yesterday,
The questions and answers conjoin,
Cognizance comforts ignorance
As beneficence bids one's heart
Remain open.

Such a gentle moment, this.

Awareness awakening.




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Reviewed on July 19, 2018
You make me crazy this is so great! I love the part, "Soaring eagles share strident cries.
Languid frogs croak their humorous jest.
One is dared to jump "

!!!!!!! So fine!

Love ya!

Jane

Reviewed by Jerry Bolton
Reviewed on July 18, 2018
Although I becamme bogged down a couple of times, I reread it and found (for me) the guist of the poem, and I realized lines which caused me to understand that you very well could have been writting about me years and years ago.

Such as "Continues its struggle To remember innocence lost."

Reviewed by Ronald Hull
Reviewed on July 18, 2018
You have created landscapes of images in this quest for clarification. For some, it never comes. For some, once in a lifetime. For a few, while rare, if thankfully comes more than once in a lifetime of searching.

You really turned up the thought process in this one!

Ron

Reviewed by John Herlihy
Reviewed on July 18, 2018
Gentle indeed if and when it comes. Nicely rendered poem.


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