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Woe is Me

by Odin odin@aflx.com — Read all 3,869 poems by Odin odin@aflx.com

Mistakes are often labeled a bad rap, given they are most often seen as negative outcomes of decisions. Yet, even with errors of judgment, the aftermath poses the opportunity for choice; learn, or buy into victimization. (Image by Michael P. Ness)

Thursday, January 3, 2019


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Woe is Me  


Might parental upbringing be but a whirlwind
wavering over the quicksand of youthful fear?

As children, should there be lessons learned
through the ignorance of grace
and the false power of intimidating?

Our adolescence provides so many missteps
we embrace without reason,
even though we possess the sure-footedness,
but choose to ignore the balance offered.

And then there is adulthood,
where words and actions are often
expressed with hatred and judgment,
even as our innate nature is to accept
rather than reject,
empathize, rather than criticize,
embrace rather than self-destruct.

Instead of discovering errors as revelatory,
we try the “woe is me” with mistakes,
enjoining the pandemic of victimization,
all the while forgetting the choice of grace
we so often visited upon in our childhood playground…


so long ago.

 



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Reviewed by Ronald Hull
Reviewed on January 4, 2019
You said a lot about human nature here. I'm so grateful that my parents were young and working hard. Not spending a lot of time disciplining us so that I was free to learn and grow from my own mistakes.

Just yesterday, my caregiver told me that she liked to use "scare tactics" on her children, like showing them pictures of rotten teeth to get them to brush their teeth daily and properly. I laughed, but it took me a long time to learn to take care of my teeth from my mere experience.

Ron

Reviewed by A. Frailey
Reviewed on January 4, 2019
An excellent observation of human truth. Ruan and John make great points, sharpening our vision. We like to have free will. We just don't like to take responsibility for it. Ownership. Freedom. Comes at a cost. Thanks for sharing. Have a beautiful weekend.

Reviewed by Ruan Mills
Reviewed on January 4, 2019
I agree with John for the most part. Although I note that, as the generations of society move on, children hold grudges more and more, some of them shaping their entire lives on those grudges.
What have we done! ...and what will younger generations do to correct it, I wonder?

Reviewed by John Herlihy
Reviewed on January 4, 2019
It would be nice to "move on" after learning from our mistakes. That's what we should do I guess. Sound advice. I've noticed in children that they usually don't hold on to grudges, but quickly move on. We can learn from their "choice of grace."


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