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Undeterred

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DUBAI, United Arab Emirates — Ordered by the White House to the Persian Gulf, the USS Abraham Lincoln aircraft carrier has become a 100,000-ton barometer of the tensions between Iran and the U.S.

Whether one be a hawk, dove or pacifist, the uniformed wounded past sand future are special. Can enough be said? Can enough respect be given for their bravery? Is there any reality more searing, more permanent than the experience of battle? With US wars seeming to have no end, the ever daunting question remains: When will the next begin? (Image by yahoonews)

Tuesday, May 21, 2019


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Undeterred

 

Peace in search of war

 

WE

 

With smartphones
Computer smart cars
Driverless transit
Gigabyte this
Terabyte that

 

THEY

 

Crippled minds and limbs
Wheelchairs
Prosthetics
Crutches
Beds
Knowing sure
From where they came
Knowing not
Where they shall go

 

THERAPISTS/DOCTORS

 

Caring in their way
Address the circles
Like gentle creatures awaiting validation
Veterans attentively turn ears
Leaning forward
Sitting
Reclining
Still breathing

 

Compassionate directives come forth

Some square their shoulders
Others straighten legs
A few retain stoic resolve
While the heartiest
Blink their acknowledgment
Some with the left eye
Others with the right
Whichever has survived

 

THEY

 

Stare blankly
Neither here in group
Nor there with the blasts
Merely as existence in limbo

 

Why try asks one

‘Cause there's still a mission to complete
To retain life in that arm you still have
To keep atrophy away from the spinal cord smashed
But not severed by shrapnel
To know
There is help
There are choices
There is life of another kind
Needing to be shared
To prepare those of the next war

Truly have their back

As they learn to adjust
Some with eyes of glass
Skulls of titanium
Feet of shapely plastic
All with hearts still beating

 

WE

 

The many jaded TV spectators
Will tweet our friends
Cell-photo our spouses
Even unconsciously text ourselves
Ya gotta tune this in
Wow!

 

THEY

 

Like a circle of tenacious buds
Having weathered tempests unimagined
Await blossoms that may never come
Awakening to each dawn
A little at a time
Nurturing desired full bloom
Knowing storms will often happen
As part of it all

For as their scarred numbers remain

They continue as a different reality

War in search of peace

Undeterred

 



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Reviewed by Ronald Hull
Reviewed on May 22, 2019
A very poignant and stirring piece. I admire your skill with words that hit hard. What the "fake" news likes to highlight are the "success" stories of those disabled by the war machine. Most often these are physical accomplishments that people who stigmatize disability think no longer can be done, like run marathons and other feats of stamina and strength. But no television can view the psychological damage that even the physically unhurt returned with. Disabled or not, some have told me and are crying out for help. Many are committing suicide.

We have to stop brandishing nuclear weapon against nuclear weapon. They are not swords and their collateral damage is extinction. We have to stop going after small countries and beating them up to show our military superiority. We have to quit trying to dethrone petty dictators because the CIA has failed in their dirty business while putting them in power. We just have to quit. We must defend ourselves, but only when a real threat to our mainland is imminent. Terrorism comes from deranged people. That is our real threat right now. Mostly those in our homeland who are being treated badly for one reason or another and psychologically unbalanced, take advantage of lax gun laws and seek either suicide by police or going out in the glory of killing other people like a videogame or like some twisted hero of an assassin.

Ron

Reviewed by Jerry Bolton
Reviewed on May 22, 2019
Maybe not "peace from war," but it is very possible to have peace from mutual respect . . .

Reviewed by Ed Matlack
Reviewed on May 21, 2019
There is no such thing as peace coming from war,
At the very least not anymore...-e-


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