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One's Great Way

by Odin odin@aflx.com — Read all 3,869 poems by Odin odin@aflx.com

In today’s world, recognizing and living a life of value is a precarious precipice too many plunge over. (Image by Emir Kusturica)

Saturday, August 10, 2019


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One’s Great Way


Stuff you bought
is nothing compared to what you built;
never that which you came by,
but that which you constructed and gave.

Lest we forget…

To learn is but a step in the right direction;
What did you do to teach?

Success is limited,
but significance is without boundary.

Of infinite importance
is what your integrity,
tenderness and sacrifice became.

To have loved others with clarity and care
is the measurement of honest love,
the kind that makes a lasting influence on their daily tasks.

Did you empower or encourage others?
Was your example worthy of emulation?

For…

The fallacy is not the number of people you knew,
but the number feeling a painful loss
of the being that could only leave behind
the ashes of his or her mortality,
yet, a being that meant something.

What will matter is not your brilliance, fame or glory,
but your essential quality.

It’s not about death’s memory lost,
but those remembrances that live
within the hearts of those who felt your love.

Perhaps the question of what will matter
is how long you will be remembered
by whom and for what reason.

One’s life-long journey
is not a happenchance,
or that which came about through mishap.

This venture called life,
is not a matter of incident,
nor a matter of serendipity
it is one’s personal construct of energy

remembering that the great way is not difficult
for those who have no preference.



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Reviewed by Ronald Hull
Reviewed on August 11, 2019
Your words tell us a lot about how to live and finally, what we will be remembered by. Greatness is not a flash in history and everyone can have 15 minutes of fame. But you lay out what matters and it is that lasting quality of one's life that lingers long after all the hype has died and only the best remaining, the essence of what we were.

Ron

Reviewed by Richard Cederberg
Reviewed on August 11, 2019
Brings to mind a Bertrand Russell quote: "The whole problem with the world is that fools and fanatics are always so sure of themselves, and wiser people so full of doubts." A moving piece Bruce, woven together with unfeigned humility and sincerity. Enjoyed. Thanks for sharing. r

Reviewed by John Herlihy
Reviewed on August 10, 2019
"It's not about death's memory lost,
but those remembrances that live
within the hearts of those who felt your love."

A fine message we all need to take to heart in this discordant age that we live in. It's not easy to be 21st century man/woman; but it becomes easier if we cling to the old, traditional values that have so well served previous generations.


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