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Pocket Rebirths

by Odin odin@aflx.com — Read all 3,869 poems by Odin odin@aflx.com

- If you’ve ever had a cigar box of memories, you can understand why so many ask if pocket companions pass on some magic? Remembering my pop and one of the last moments he created for my son.

Saturday, August 31, 2019


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Pocket Rebirths

 

Layers of love are never lost
Even after a good bath

How long had it been?

A mantle of dust
A bit of sand
Some fish oil residue
“gives special character”
He used to say

So many days now past
Magnifying ants
Imagined horror stints
Trimming a yolk branch
For slingshot accuracy
Screw-driving Erector Set connections
Gutting deep-lake spinner catches
Leather punching favorite belts
Ah, the looking back

Now like new once more
Everything folded back in
Servitude getting momentary rest
As a hand-me-down’s rebirth
Awaits further challenges

It’s peaceful under here
Dark and warm
Haven’t been this clean forever
Kind of eerie
Like narrow canyons awaiting sunrise

Loved being cocooned back in my sales box
Wrapped in red and white
Yellow-ribboned for giving
All set to surprise

Soon

His grandson’s pocket-memories will begin
As that’s what Swiss Army Knives are for…
Passing to the next that which makes growing up never ending

 

 



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Reviewed by Ronald Hull
Reviewed on September 1, 2019
Your journey in this poem conjured up two thoughts. The first was a box of my childhood that my mother gave me a few years ago as she was downsizing and moving from house to mobile home. Lately I have been rummaging through my childhood with some of those memories in my book, tentatively titled Midcentury Tales: Unfettered Youth.

There were no Swiss knives in my family. The good stuff was passed down to others. But I did get a very old black-and-white TV from my grandmother, "So your cousin (name withheld) won't get it." And a bread box containing my grandfather's very few old and worn-out tools decorated on top with the USS Constitution. Oh, my father's badly bent up bugle from his CCC camp days. I can't play it.

Ron

Reviewed by Michael Schafer
Reviewed on September 1, 2019
Very nice. From one generation to another. Pass it on down.

Reviewed on September 1, 2019
Your words are so touching and take me back-ish!! My great grandson is going on 3........time for a Swiss Army knife..........maybe a few more years. I love this poem, Odin!!!

Love ya!

Jane


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