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Love's Sweater Weave

by Odin odin@aflx.com — Read all 3,869 poems by Odin odin@aflx.com

A dedication to all veterans who live with little appreciation, we, who for the most part live in the fast lane, find it maybe too easy to forget love has many forms.

Saturday, October 19, 2019


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Love’s Sweater Weave

 


The aged veteran sits idly
Upon rocker and barren porch
Remembering

Unlike a space suit
Its every fiber fit
By rigid standard

Unlike the starched khaki shirt
Its extremities forged firm as armor
Its pleats kept at attention

Unlike the dress blues
Symbolic of authority and command
Unyielding in its façade of glory

The sweater
Like love
Molds to behavior
Forever willing to comfort the flesh
And bring warmth to the heart

As passion's woven threads
Assimilate the wearer's hardships
Fear of frayed ends disappear
Accepting entwined living
Is not without accident and wear

Affection asks little in return
Needing only to be spared
The folding into a drawer
Of forgotten memories

Given care
The patience of love
Remains forever dedicated

Embracing any and all it touches

And like the tattered loyal sweater
Judges not the body
But dutifully complies
Abiding the ever shrinking collapse
Of life fully lived

The veteran rocks slowly to sleep
His sweater held close

 



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Reviewed on October 20, 2019
Oh, Odin! This is so touching! Now, I'm thinking about a little pile of sewing I must get to so there will be, "The folding into a drawer/ Of forgotten memories".....Lived a full life?...........oh, yes.

Love ya!

Jane

Reviewed by Ronald Hull
Reviewed on October 20, 2019
This could be applied old age in general where fast lane dwellers often slow down to. Reminded me of the great uncle of a girlfriend of mine dwelled on the wrong side of the river in a quiet neighborhood. He was a vet and on warm days and evenings probably didn't wear that sweater. But as prostitutes from the main drag a block away came walking by, they often used his bathroom for relief and occasionally sat a spell with him on that porch. Girlfriends all.

I think I may have just conjured up a possible story or poem. Sorry for stepping on yours.

Ron

Reviewed by John Herlihy
Reviewed on October 19, 2019
A beautiful way of expression the multiplicity of love through the intricacy and weave of a sweater. Clothing was never so meaningful as in the symbolic image of the weave.


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