AuthorsDen.com  Join | Login 

 
Where Authors and Readers come together!

Authors | Books | Audiobooks | eBooks | Signed Bookstore | Stories | Articles | Poetry | Blogs | News | Events | Reviews | Videos | Success | Gold Members | Testimonials

Featured Authors:  Judith Bailey, iEdward Patterson, iJ. Allen Wilson, iKarin Adams, iT. Weber, iJohn Burns, iRobin Ouzman Hislop, iLinda Frank, iRachel Glasgow, iMaria Rushing, i

  Home > Poetry > Poetry        Popular: Books, Stories, Articles, Poetry        Authors: A B C D E F G H I J K L M N O P Q R S T U V W X Y Z     

Odin odin@aflx.com

 Follow Me  

· 4,268 titles
· 12,669 Reviews
· Share with Friends!
· Save to My Library
·
Member Since: Jul, 2008

   Sitemap
   My Blog
   Contact Author
   Read Reviews



Books
· Perceptions

· ECHOSIS

· Prosetry at Work

· Said and Unsaid - Vol 1

· 3 WAY MIRROR


Short Stories
· Patience Waning

· Ladle Lines (A prosetry memory)

· A Gentle Man

· Pacing Love's Journey

· Gratitude

· A Sticky Conversation

· Blazing Now and Then

· Vulnerable Captivity

· The Kite That Would Not Bow

· Time


Articles
· War and Peace

· Desperation Breeds Desperation

· Preference Manifest

· Innocent Guilt

· Barbed Isolation

· A Place...

· Sanity's Loss

· Organs Anonymous

· Fatuous Beyond Absurdity

· Truth is One


Poetry
· The Life-long Pernicious Evil

· Cherishing Sounds of Silence

· Understanding the Unexplainable

· Reality of Another Kind

· Finding Trust Again

· Aromalicious Memories

· A Jungle-rain Pastorale

· Sediment Within the Soul

· Life's Enormous Green Chest

· Roadkill Memoriam

         More poetry...

Odin odin@aflx.com, click here to update your web pages on AuthorsDen.

Books by
Odin odin@aflx.com











See all Books
by Odin odin@aflx.com


   
  Share   Print   Save   

Gradient Motion

by Odin odin@aflx.com — Read all 3,869 poems by Odin odin@aflx.com

Perhaps our existence, along with all of Nature, is but a particular level in the cosmic-helix phenomena thought of by some as the gradient motion. (Image by pinterest)

Wednesday, February 12, 2020


Poem Artwork

 

Gradient Motion

 

 

Wanting
As ripened fruit
                          I awoke

Falling toward other beginnings
Choices unbridled
                         I knew

Warm hands met me
Waiting sounds
                          I heard

Soft urges
Anxious voices
Holding my inborn stillness
                          I traveled

With cries of birth
I decreed my death
Sun did shine
Rains did come
                            I lived

Collecting earth-time
Singing its experience
Clock hands began their hesitation
Movement ever cautious
                            I'm ready

Archives labeled
Summoned filings completed
Make of my heart
A final expansion
Into the next ever living

Gradient motion

 

 

 

 



Want to review or comment on this poem?


Need a FREE Reader Membership?

Reviewed by Ronald Hull
Reviewed on February 13, 2020
With such a loving soft tone you have written about a place in time and space that I cannot in my literally pragmatic way, comprehend. Beautifully so.

Ron

Reviewed on February 13, 2020
Oh, my, Odin! This is some provocative writing and I love it! I can "see" it! Very cool!!!

Love ya!

Jane

Reviewed by Richard Cederberg
Reviewed on February 13, 2020
Mitch Albom in his novel 'The Time Keeper' wrote: "Man alone chimes the hour. And, because of this, he alone suffers a paralyzing fear that no other creature endures. A fear of time running out." Thankfully, for those who embrace it, writing (poetic construct) is a hotline to each of our hearts and minds. And we forget this emotional power at our own peril. Your critical thinking approach to poetry is uniquely you. Fine thoughts Odinsan. Enjoyed. Peace... r

Reviewed by John Herlihy
Reviewed on February 12, 2020
A fascinating concept - never heard the expression before - well delivered. I'll have to think about this.

"With cries of birth,
I decreed my death." Brilliant!


New Poetry by Odin odin@aflx.com
hhh