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Books
· Perceptions

· ECHOSIS

· Prosetry at Work

· Said and Unsaid - Vol 1

· 3 WAY MIRROR


Short Stories
· Patience Waning

· Ladle Lines (A prosetry memory)

· A Gentle Man

· Pacing Love's Journey

· Gratitude

· A Sticky Conversation

· Blazing Now and Then

· Vulnerable Captivity

· The Kite That Would Not Bow

· Time


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· Desperation Breeds Desperation

· Preference Manifest

· Innocent Guilt

· Barbed Isolation

· A Place...

· Sanity's Loss

· Organs Anonymous

· Fatuous Beyond Absurdity

· Truth is One


Poetry
· The Life-long Pernicious Evil

· Cherishing Sounds of Silence

· Understanding the Unexplainable

· Reality of Another Kind

· Finding Trust Again

· Aromalicious Memories

· A Jungle-rain Pastorale

· Sediment Within the Soul

· Life's Enormous Green Chest

· Roadkill Memoriam

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Last Breath Snapshots

by Odin odin@aflx.com — Read all 3,869 poems by Odin odin@aflx.com

a nation in breathing-fear, for many, here is perhaps the rush for…. (Image by briuanna-damra)

Wednesday, April 29, 2020


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Last Breath Snapshots

 

 

 

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Waxy paper

cartooned respite

chewy pink

bubbles small

messes big

don't you be blowin' them

your brows be shaved

daunted mother

silly child

 

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Driver's license

double feature drive-in

windows open

friends in next car

cuddle up seats

brown-bagged cherries

stems to pull

pits to suck clean

stomach aches ignored

paper peeled straws

blowgun ammo

shot between cars

shoring up boredom

while girlfriend gazes

Jimmy Dean's red jacket

up there four stories tall

 

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Makin' it on my own

lonely brownstone

Central Park always dark

letters few

collectors many

pay or else

notice this

notice that

Oops

the draft is nice

they say

three squares a day

see the world

'til you don't

 

Dark storms

rain down shrapnel

brain entangled

sunrise runs

nature hides

evil's time

 

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Smiles

smiles

door to door

vacuum cleaners rule

used car

crazy wife

crazier life

now that's a neat package

'til it's not

 

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Jack is good

Smirnoff bad

bar mirrors in front 

noise in back

cacophonous peanut shells below

orchestrating stubby pencil

upon napkins write

verse or prose

doesn't matter

rewrapping

neat packages those 'til

 

'til glad hand extends

binds me in different wrappings

dust jacket shines

mailbox stays empty

dust jacket gone

 

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Someday

an old shep will appear

giving neat packages

for me to bag and seal

while we

walk the walk

bark the talk

shuffle left

shuffle right 

finding straight ahead

 

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The inevitable final breath

however it comes

neat package

patiently waiting

to be wrapped

with love and appreciation

 

But…

 

Until then

 

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Reviewed by Ronald Hull
Reviewed on April 30, 2020
Refreshingly brief snapshots of a life fully lived. I especially liked it when Old Shep came along like in my childhood when many a barnyard collie was given that name.

Ron


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