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· The Kite That Would Not Bow

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· A Jungle-rain Pastorale

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Dust Motes

by Odin odin@aflx.com — Read all 3,869 poems by Odin odin@aflx.com


7/4/20 - With so little credence given to dust, perhaps it’s time to give credit. After all, dust is all that’s left of something that once was. (Image by pinterest)

Saturday, July 4, 2020


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Dust Motes

 

Like a toy for the wind

Perhaps I came to the city to enjoin dust afloat

 

Young and carefree

Naïve and innocent

Saw streets of hell

Avenues of paradise

 

Checked into a hotel

Room’s lightbulb so dim

Designed to prevent seeing through the darkness

 

Through a 5th Ave tailor shop window

A doleful old man with pin-balancing-lips

Kneeled before a bride of smiles and tears

 

Walked in rain past lovers kissing on park bench

Rounded a corner where a sobbing man ran about crazily waving a gun

 

Saw kids jump roof to roof

All for girl worship

 

Witnessed a homeless woman

As she and her mangy dog berated God at a church entrance

While on the corner atop an apple box

Bible thumping shouts merged with taxi anger

 

Such were the early days…

 

Saw so much

Learned so little

Until I became some of what I’d seen

Adding my residue dust to some reality lived



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Reviewed by Ronald Hull
Reviewed on July 5, 2020
Dust in the wind. Your poetry often harkens back to those lonely days in the big city where things were easy and they were tough. The experience still hangs heavy on your mind. And it hasn't changed much, except that now, with the pandemic, it is more hidden from sight.

While my partner sweeps and vacuums daily, declaring that there is too much dust. And we are experiencing dust that has come on the tradewinds all the way from the Sahara, I don't see it much except collecting outdoors on unattended things.

I miss the dust of my childhood. Old barns filled with hay, old abandoned buildings and other structures where there were abundant holes in their façade to allow the sun to come beaming like lasers through abundant dust motes floating in the air like butterflies or fairies. Helicoptering without power on thermals of their own design.

Sorry, you made me wax poetic. Dust mote's are among my favorite thing.

Ron

Reviewed by John Herlihy
Reviewed on July 5, 2020
Ah we are but dust motes. Love the juxtaposition of images that make your point, young and impressionable in the big city.


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