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Invisible Privacy

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We’re a society where between Social Media, Smart Phone cameras, and the die-hard gawkers of the world, anyone trying to just remain one’s own private self is increasingly difficult. (Painting by Dave Perkins)

Sunday, September 6, 2020


Poem Artwork

 

Invisible Privacy

 

This neighbor of sorts

Bears a resident

Who hasn’t been visible on his porch

For long before the neighbors maintained watch

On the postman of unfailing promptness

 Delivering his Social Security

 

The next-door feline of suspicious nature

As well as the resident squirrel peering

Were always aware of his presence

 

Yet…

 

Of late

Draperies drawn during the day

Unlit windows at night

Porch-swing continually unused

And layered leaves of fall

With chained garage

And weathered car gathering dust

Made the Norman Rockwell like picture complete

 

So…

 

Those of busybody nature

Suspect he is spying on them

From peek-holes in his threadbare curtains

Looking at them

Through the windows of their cars as they pass

Or their nightly stroll with covert eyes

And leashed dogs straining for the scent

 

Occasionally…

 

An odd swirl of wind through the trees

Makes the intrusive minds imagine voices

Where in truth

Such doesn’t exist

 

So it goes for neighborhoods

Resisting change

Fearful psyches

Hanging their faded flag

Feeling entitled to things

Remaining as they had once been

 

Such are those…

 

Denying the man whose changes

Continue to haunt their intruding eyes

As he continues to enjoy his invisible privacy

As a man of color

Who has earned his rights.

 

Such peace can never be denied

 

 

 

 

 



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Reviewed by Budd Nelson
Reviewed on September 7, 2020
should not be denied

Reviewed by Ronald Hull
Reviewed on September 7, 2020
Wow! I wasn't prepared for the whammy at the end! I was reading quite clearly of the way that neighbors, nosy neighbors, always watch for telltale signs and then gossip about what is going on whether truthful or not. In the case of someone real becoming invisible, as I read, I saw the old man becoming unable to do things he did (like me), and disappear from daily activities outside of the house. My reasonable conclusion was that someone had died without loudly proclaiming up and down the street, "I died! That's why you don't see me, anymore.

On the other hand, people of color have been invisible in their plight, until suddenly they are noticed while being kneeled upon or shot in the back. Can you see them now? I have seen them all along. By the way people my disability , often hidden away from society, subject to all rumors and worries about what they can or cannot do. Even though we often prove them wrong.

Ron

Reviewed by John Herlihy
Reviewed on September 7, 2020
Indeed, privacy is a thing very difficult to preserve in this day and age. It hardly exist anymore: "Denying the man whose changes continue to haunt their intruding eyes."


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