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Books
· Perceptions

· ECHOSIS

· Prosetry at Work

· Said and Unsaid - Vol 1

· 3 WAY MIRROR


Short Stories
· Patience Waning

· Ladle Lines (A prosetry memory)

· A Gentle Man

· Pacing Love's Journey

· Gratitude

· A Sticky Conversation

· Blazing Now and Then

· Vulnerable Captivity

· The Kite That Would Not Bow

· Time


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· Desperation Breeds Desperation

· Preference Manifest

· Innocent Guilt

· Barbed Isolation

· A Place...

· Sanity's Loss

· Organs Anonymous

· Fatuous Beyond Absurdity

· Truth is One


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· The Life-long Pernicious Evil

· Cherishing Sounds of Silence

· Understanding the Unexplainable

· Reality of Another Kind

· Finding Trust Again

· Aromalicious Memories

· A Jungle-rain Pastorale

· Sediment Within the Soul

· Life's Enormous Green Chest

· Roadkill Memoriam

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I'm Fine

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- Lying about one’s disposition is common. But what might be the long-term ramifications of one who tries to cover, bury, even fling it outward with… (image by Rene Magritte)

Monday, September 21, 2020


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I’m Fine

 

 

Ever think of a person falling apart in the dark

Making any sound

And if sound is mandatory?

 

Is it disturbing, bombastic, and offensive

When the egregious complaints of a broken heart

Are ultimately discovered?

 

Or…

 

Might it be the soft moan,

The lie of the soul

The triumph of deception

That is forgiven with…

 

I’m fine?

 



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Reviewed by Richard Cederberg
Reviewed on September 24, 2020
I usually say "I'm fine" when I don't want to share any details or get into an in-depth conversation. Interacting with humans is an art that I have not yet mastered. Enjoyed. Thanks for sharing. r

Reviewed by Ronald Hull
Reviewed on September 22, 2020
It covers a lot of ills. Especially if one does not want to go into detail. But who wants to hear the details of the "slings and arrows of outrageous fortune all we are all heir to?"

When I learned that a former girlfriend told a friend that I was, "on my last legs." I had an urge to send her an email declaring that I was, "just fine." But my legs are gone… Haven't walked on them for 28 years, so I guess I've been on the last of my legs for a very long time. Really miss dancing with her, a real professional.

Ron

Reviewed by John Herlihy
Reviewed on September 22, 2020
That's all that matters, especially on the backside of this disaster.

Reviewed by Budd Nelson
Reviewed on September 22, 2020
we hope so Odin


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