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The Weave

by Odin odin@aflx.com — Read all 3,869 poems by Odin odin@aflx.com

At times, it’s important to distinguish between to love and be loved, even when it comes to sweaters. Veterans often face the quandary of war’s ability to expose, and/or protect, love and/or be loved.

Saturday, April 3, 2021


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The Weave


The aged veteran sits idly
Upon rocker and barren porch

Holding his gaze on his sweater
Remembering

Unlike a space suit
Its every fiber fit
By rigid standard

Unlike the starched khaki shirt
Its extremities forged firm as armor
Its pleats kept at attention

Unlike the dress blues
Symbolic of authority and command
Unyielding in its façade of glory

A military sweater
Like love
Molds to behavior
Forever willing to comfort the flesh
And bring warmth to the heart

As passion's woven threads
Assimilate the wearer's hardships
Even as fear of frayed ends disappear
Accepting entwined living
Is not without further accident and wear

 

Still…


Affection asks little in return
Needing only to be spared
The folding into a drawer of forgotten memories

Given care
The patience of love

Even in war
Remains forever dedicated
Enfolding any and all it touches

And…


Like the tattered loyal sweater
Judges not the body
But dutifully complies
Abiding the ever-shrinking collapse
Of a life fully lived

The veteran rocks slowly to sleep
His woven remembrance held close

The question apparent

Has the wearing history of his sweater

Embraced the soldier

Or has it been the lonely soldier embracing the sweater.

 

He smiles in his sleep

Letting the weave’s warmth caress his hands

As he recalls his mother’s words

“Deserving to be loved requires we not forget

One must also give forth love”

 



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Reviewed by John Herlihy
Reviewed on April 4, 2021
You have woven so much mystery and insight into this poem thru the symbolism of the "weave". I have written and used this image as well, many times because it is so poignant and rich in its implications. Excellent work, finely woven.

Reviewed by Ronald Hull
Reviewed on April 4, 2021
A very touching poem of a veteran's sweater that became part of his being as he aged.

You reminded me of the wool military blankets that my mother acquired after World War II. She gave Roger the gray one and me the black one. When I found my kapok filled crinkly plastic sleeping bag annoying, I opted for sleeping outdoors with a threadbare flannel blanket next to my skin and the scratchy wool blanket on top to help me sleep through any kind of weather. Eventually, only the black wool blanket remained in my backseat of my car in case I went into the ditch on an icy road somewhere and rescue might be far off.

Ron


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