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A Father's Shadow

by Odin odin@aflx.com — Read all 3,869 poems by Odin odin@aflx.com

Few embrace the senior years for fear of loss, especially with husbands and fathers. Some believe in the end, there’s some magic that still dwells somewhere. (Image by pinterest)

Saturday, June 19, 2021


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A Father’s Shadow

 

 

 

A son remembers…

There was a time
She’d float beside him
Their footsteps in sync
Their heartbeats in unison

Even at midnight
The neighborhood park imbued their love
With colors and honeysuckle fragrance
Lake’s shimmering moon-mirror
Sending ripples through enjoined hands

But oh the face

She knew not a grimace
Nor any sadness
Her smile
Hope’s subtlety
Passion’s caretaker

Time passed

Clouded skies
Like cataracts of mind
Faded that lovely face
Their fantasy stroll
Became but silhouette

And still…

A bench remained
To sit
Dream
Listen to each other’s breath
While rustling leaves
Drifted away

Seasons passed
Strolls became nurse-like chaperoning
Movement by wheelchair
Breath by oxy-caddy

His bench still stands
Warm to the touch
For a very long time,

My father’s wife always stopped to listen
As memory’s shadow whispers
“May I hold your hand?”

 



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Reviewed on June 21, 2021
What comes from the heart touches the heart and your poem touched me deeply, Odin. Very fine!

Love ya!

Jane

Reviewed by John Herlihy
Reviewed on June 20, 2021
Beautiful and most touching. We all remember our mother and father in different. This reminds me of my father, not for the sameness but for the difference. Fine work.

Reviewed by Ronald Hull
Reviewed on June 20, 2021
You painted a wonderful ending for a father's life, able to walk with his wife to their favorite spot in the park right up until the very end when he had to be pushed there by her in a wheelchair.

I saw my father's life ending when he stopped playing golf, riding around the community on a bicycle, and telling me, "I'm losing weight and I can't seem to put it back on anymore."

Ron


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