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One's Pyre Ever Aflame

by Odin odin@aflx.com — Read all 3,869 poems by Odin odin@aflx.com

Does one’s age really make a difference in how we anticipate the end, or is it really only a matter of taking the time, whether young or old, to consider the many possibilities of your energy’s continuing journey. Here is a piece of prosetry about an aged dreamer and writer of his truths.

Thursday, July 15, 2021


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One’s Pyre Ever Aflame

His existence knows quiddity,
for beyond this moment,
so flows a tide of quintessence
upon infinity’s shoreline.

Sweltering in the sun,
crouched on calloused travel,
words hover over his paper's anxious direction,
pen needling the worn language
seen through cataract-opacity.

Linguistic currents,
like layered tongues
savoring word upon word
suddenly lurch across the page,
thirsting for shade,
even as a belligerent sun
forges blistered lips
voicing one's last utterances.

This tenacious pause stretches,
allowing sweat's cooling release
as final decay preys
upon yesterday's spent energy and emotion.

Here…

Ancestral sand and salt
soothes wounds,
embraces quest's end,
as life’s circuitous relay takes final rest
with tide's natural evolution.

Soon…

His pyre launched unceremoniously,
invites time's flaming arrow,
arcing its tribute,
inviting his pen, paper,
heart and mind
to burn as one
into the essence of continuation.

Inextinguishable existence afloat…

Compass free.

 



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Reviewed by Richard Cederberg
Reviewed on July 16, 2021
Third person gives the reader the impression that you're talking about yourself. "Quiddity" like haecceity - the essence that makes something the kind of thing it is, and also makes it different from any other - can certainly be applied to every human being. I've heard it said that personal perception (subjective truth) is like painting a scenery. No matter how beautifully you paint, it will still be a painting of the scenery, not the scenery itself. The eyes see everything around us, but the mind shows us what we want to see. The writers inquisitive mind continues to envision possibility. A thought-provoking piece. Thank you for sharing. rlc

Reviewed by John Herlihy
Reviewed on July 16, 2021
The striking images of fire, sun and flame ignite thoughts on the impending end as a kind of beginning, "compass free", as you insightfully said.


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