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Acidulous Icing

by Odin odin@aflx.com — Read all 3,869 poems by Odin odin@aflx.com

A prosetry exploration: Does today's superhighway of information report or promote the precipitous cliffs of folly… those stacked layers of sweet-thick delusions? (Painting by Edward Munch)

Thursday, November 11, 2021


Poem Artwork

 

 

 

Acidulous Icing

 

 

From where such icing comes?

 

Paths of growth
molecule by molecule
osmosis bringing some
birth bringing many

 

All perform their purpose
the leaf
the berry
the evolved creature
man

 

Yet unknown to most
forces concealed
by nature
by technology
by deceit
tempt the dangerous walk
upon ice too thin to trust

 

Nature warns us
as technology but implores us
all while gluttony takes aim
ignoring any and all boundary

 

Like a flame unquenched
envy and desire finds oxygen
amidst our unbridled drive

 

Once love's caress
now but duplicitous habit
learned fear feasts upon the screams
contained within

 

If I can't have it
you can't either

 

Grown up children trapped
by fantasy-imbued expectations
clothes
nips
tucks
lifts
implants
Botoxification
and lest we forget
Platinum cards

All frostings

 

Yet distinct from unlimited plastic
or yellow reds and blues in a bottle
the attendant-poisonous infliction on one's mind
remains as an open wound
where malice hides
waits
gently revs its over-sweet engine
then creeps
until
while sentience sleeps
and vulnerability lies naked
hidden opportunity leaps

 

Ah
un-earned desserts
so crafty
with such clever disguises
for our less than perfect incisors
hidden by practiced thin lips of cunning
now gone needle-engorged kiss kiss

 

Sugary coverings all
to satiate visceral appetites
regardless of cost

 

And if
reality’s lure takes its time
there's always the awaiting tabloids
for lathering acidulous frosting to feed upon

 

How tempting
their four-color purpose
promoting life’s predatory peep-shows
glorifying weaknesses and mistakes
venality in disguise
awaiting the pathetic of our species
especially at check-out stands
that place where reading takes place
the only reading for many

Filling minds with more and more toxins

 

And yet...

 

Some of us choose to believe
breath remains in abundance
to think

to discern
to do

to be
something beyond this acidic finger-lickin’ malaise
something akin to the beginning
when life was Nature's innocent gift
when a baby's need was to rejoice
not regret

 

Oh the weight of layered

Acidulous Icing



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Reviewed by Ruan Mills
Reviewed on November 12, 2021
Oh my word! I LOVE this!!!
It says it all in such kind and gentle tones...but makes no bones about reality and that which must be seen.
My snow cap is off to you, Odin, for this absolute masterpiece.
One of your very, very best xx


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