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Wavering Rainbows Drifting

by Odin odin@aflx.com — Read all 3,869 poems by Odin odin@aflx.com

Not long ago, franchised hope of elections cycled periodically, but always with more fervor every four years in November. Today, we're down to such cycles every month.

Tuesday, August 30, 2022


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Wavering Rainbows Drifting

 

 

Habituation eased into town long ago
Thought to be natural,

It was.

Praised as stability,
It was.
Embraced as destiny,
It was.

 

Procreation ruled the nights,
Delivery rooms,

 the days.
Time passed and like flies to a sugar fix,
Habituation swarmed bank tellers on payday,
Local bars on Friday night,
Churches on Sunday.

 

Workweek habits continued,
Harassment ‘round the water cooler,

Ass kissing ‘round the bosses,

Entitlement ‘round the calling-in-sick phone.

 

Then something happened.

 

Times got rough.

Unemployment rose.

Businesses shut down.
Politicians sought donations elsewhere.

Habituation stumbled out of town.

 

Dark became the memories of enticements.

Cobwebs hung furtively,

Tying unlit lamp post to shattered neon signs,
Side streets to alleyways,
Locked doors to broken windows.

 

Summer storms passed over,

Leaving muddy puddles,

Their rippled reflections
But gurgling echoes to the moon.
Goodbye waves of regret.

 

Today…

 

Not far down the road,

A new infestation of impassioned hunters
Polish their duplicitous wings,

Awaiting yet another bounty of ignorance
To buy into the inducement
Of both flight
And fright,
Believing this,
Believing that,
Unaware that allurement
Is a barb of many disguises.

 

Just as on a clear night,
Or a dew-covered sunrise,
Wings of abalone color
Will flicker from the webs of
Habituation's seductive lure,

Alerting tomorrows entrapment of imagings,

Like restless wings of dragonflies
Hoverimg like wavering rainbows drifting.


 



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Reviewed by Diana Legun
Reviewed on September 3, 2022
Few poems of yours are once-throughers for me. Many are three-fers. This one reads for me like a series of very stunning photographs taken by a discerning and story-telling eye, with two video clips in the mix — video 1 = gurgling puddle reflections of the moon; video 2 = albalone wings flickering webs. Magnificent opening line: “Habituation eased into town long ago” — that resembled the ‘capture the reader in the first paragraph’ advice for a novel. Irresistible to not read on…….the rest of everything in here carries a boatload of awareness; i.e. “bounty of ignorance.” (small typo in first word last line). You contrast so much of our ‘creatureless’ behavior to nature, by creatureless I mean the ways in which people have deviated from nature through our behavior spawned from ‘thought.’…through our locked doors and broken windows. The good part about ‘people,’ is that we can also ‘see’ for ourselves what we are doing, like you have done here, show it, and tell of it, write it, paint it, sing it, share it, maybe making some good from doing just that. ~~ djl

Reviewed by Ronald Hull
Reviewed on August 30, 2022
Your poem seems to warn us of change. That habitation can be a negative thing and keep us from being nimble when we need to change.

Ron


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