Absolutely brilliant!
I enjoyed and experienced every word…

Diana…🍃

How uniquely-different this one is for you~~and it has the hallmark of your profundity. Also, I see your chronology in the progression of these stages. I like these matches of human states of being with incremental elements of heat sources and byproducts. This is uniquely intriguing, full of the energy of which it speaks. My favorite line is the ‘spark-prone’ reciprocal commitment. Third line from bottom makes me wonder if the word ‘honestly’ was intended to be ‘honesty.’ I love the concept of honesty unbridled. ~~ djl

All of life is energy, sometimes smoldering, sometimes flaming. Thought provoking and well penned, Odin.

Yes, we are made from exploding stars. Life first formed from volcanic heated water so hot it would scald. Heat that is in us and around us, creating a passion to move forward and write better poetry with every word.

Makes me wonder if cold-blooded creatures like snakes have any lust or love in them. But watching them bask in the sun like human sunbathers, makes me think they might have love and romance, especially the way they guard their young.

Ron

Fine use of repetition to hammer down your point, not to mention the explosive adjectives. Love it.

wow. i love the point of perspective here. those things described are all heaven, almost felt each of them. reminded me of good memories and accompanying emotions in them. thank you.