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Living Life's Octavus Steps

by Odin odin@aflx.com — Read all 3,869 poems by Odin odin@aflx.com

Accepting the 8 major and minor intervals of music to fit the cyclic evolution of continuance and life, suggests an esoteric exploration of our existence as rather ironic. (Image by Pinterest)

Sunday, November 13, 2022


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Living Life’s Octavus Steps

 

How simple and pure

The moment to start,

Seven intervals to reach

One’s next weigh station

Of endlessness.

 

With the middle C destined

To move selectively

Up the intervals to an octave high C,

Respectfully it acknowledges D

Like the child’s first move

Of exposure from the womb.

 

E as the third step of harmony,

Continues into childhood,

And reaching F finds its essence fitting,

As the mode of adolescent tension challenges,

Venturing often into the wistful and sad lament

Of dissonance.

 

Broaching bravely from the harmonic beginnings of C and E,

Grasping the 5th step, G,

Renders young adulthood complete

In a triad of harmony.

 

Leaping suddenly for the 6th step A,

The experience bodes well for adventure and risk,

Its transitional quintessence urging the next step.

 

When reaching the 7th or B,

One realizes the melody of experience

Has evolved into reflection,

For the octave of high C,

Known as the whole note of life’s summit,

Embraces this journey’s end.

 

Movement starts over again

In the cyclic unveiling,

Where the next octavus

Of existence

Awaits patiently

In the valley

Of geneses.



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Reviewed by Diana Legun
Reviewed on November 14, 2022
This eye-catching image of black keys on the beach is a true grabber. And the concept here is freshly done in correlating life growth stages with the music scale. The next octave being a weigh station and the three-note chord a harmonic trio, and it all made me think of running the scales from middle C out each direction, upper register right hand, lower register left….and that middle C representing present, high C future, low C past. Nice journey along the keyboard of life, Odin* ~~ djl

Reviewed by audrine max
Reviewed on November 14, 2022
you sure are uniquely you, Odin. as they say, there is a time for everything. i especially love the last stanza where movement starts over again.

Reviewed by Ronald Hull
Reviewed on November 14, 2022
A very common theme for you expressed in an uncommon way, octaves of life. Unique and interesting.

For me, during my E stage, I tried to learn how to play the piano. And in school, learn the basics of music, long forgotten. By my F stage, playing the piano accordion competed with outdoor activities and lost, although I enjoyed singing in choirs. Where I B now famous songs of my childhood and life come back to me well in melody and chorus. But when it comes to full lyrics do not remember the trees for the forest.

Ron


Reviewed by A. Frailey
Reviewed on November 14, 2022
Life does move in stages, harmonic, we hope. Beautiful visuals. Thanks for sharing, Odin.

Reviewed by Elisabeth Barstowe
Reviewed on November 13, 2022
Very deep and symbolic. I like it a lot.


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