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The Lovelorn Complainant

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- Recently, I was reminded that the lovelorn aged often play out their closing days like a vicious, ill-tempered, and grotesque dwarf, like Mr. Quilp, the villain of Dickens’ The Old Curiosity Shop. This character is as near as Dickens ever came to creating a truly undesirable and unhappy character. Fortunately, for us, there are learned choices that can be made in lieu of succumbing to self-pity in love’s unpredictable ways.

Monday, February 20, 2023


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The Lovelorn Complainant

 

For some…

 

The norm of aging is

Darkness knowing not of light

In the aging misbegotten soul,

Where the querulous Quilp,

Quavers erupt quaking quagmires,

Quivering quick sands,

Inviting quibbles and quarrels

Awash in queasiness,

Quackery and

Qualms.

 

Such is the norm

For those who may

Have ventured into love and lost.

 

Yet…

 

Others have dared to love and lose,

Discovering misfortune often equates

Into synaptic harmony,

Where aging reveals award for patience,

Like the essence of a fine wine

Imbibed at the right time,

Where a bathing ritual of mind

Begets the fermenting glory

Of joy reaching its proper time,

Swirling the taste of purpose.

 

Some allow the disappointment of a love experience

To cause life’s experience to feel short-changed,

Inviting wallowing in unfulfilled dreams

To become but more sour swill of accumulating waste.

 

For the lovelorn complainant

So much might be learned,

But like a desperate premature celebration,

One’s failure surrenders but another numbered claim ticket

In the heart’s pawnshop

Of desperation’s need…

 

Never to be redeemed.

 



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Reviewed by Elisabeth Barstowe
Reviewed on February 20, 2023
Clever and holds a true message for those who still seek. :)

Reviewed by Ronald Hull
Reviewed on February 20, 2023
The picture reminded me of Norman Mailer and my brief encounter with him as he belched throughout his speech to us and then showed us his very badly edited movie, Maidstone, thankfully the only one I believe he ever made totally by himself.

I have encountered both kinds of aged people. Most notably two of my uncles who both reached beyond 100 smiling all the way in happy declining retirement. And then there was the 93-year-old living below me in West Virginia who I decided to chat with and mow his quarter acre lawn.

All the guy could talk about were his complaints. While I encouraged him to tell me something about the good old days like the turn-of-the-century 1900 celebration in Pittsburgh, he didn't, just change the subject to what was going wrong in his world.

I also thought of the movie, The Pawnbroker. From the movie that broke my heart to watch.

Ron

Reviewed by John Herlihy
Reviewed on February 20, 2023
Love your stanza of multiple Qs, a quirky letter that.

Love still more the stanza following (appropriately) yet. . . full of love's possibility and fulfillment. Only for the brave of heart, even if there is "love's disappointment."


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