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Echo Fading

by Odin odin@aflx.com — Read all 3,869 poems by Odin odin@aflx.com

2023 and Japan’s new whaling “mother ship’ being built to travel as far as Antarctica. Being a conscionable advocate for save the whales and dolphins, this 1st person whale poem is imagined to keep me company as I picture future whales’ plight.

https://www.theguardian.com/environment/2023/feb/17/japans-new-whaling-mother-ship-being-built-to-travel-as-far-as-antarctica

Sunday, May 7, 2023


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Echo Fading

Sometimes
giving it your best shot
proves not enough

My speed wasn't there
oh I knew how to dodge
but today
being winded
rendered me vulnerable

It was sudden
this tethered impact
didn't think it would hurt
so much

But

Their way
the long way
hurt it did

I knew what was coming
the final shot
the storm cloud across the sun
Time was going to stop
no amount of age
wisdom
history
could stop it

It's warm now
even with the surrounding cold
freezing cold

Warmer still

Blood is everywhere
one last lunge skyward
got to breathe
my last gasp

Quiet now

That bullet did it
can hear my buddies
their agony of loss
like metal on metal
no more voices serene
harmony drifts
as cries of family fade

These last moments strange
harnessed tight
being pulled alongside my captor's hull

Warmth
Vanishing


Cold
Returning


Light
Fading

Behind me
blurred vision reveals
the futile tears of Sea Shepherd

Above me
the anguished fluttering of guardian chopper blades

Ahead of me...

If only...


Dignity ignored
passion of life forgotten
...Not the way to go


My enemies call it
the battle zone

For me
my family
my buddies
it's the feeding zone

Impact came
Violence exploded

Now

Sense of contact ebbing
pain dwindling
the upward drag
the final moments

Tonnage now rising
floating into the ether
from where I came
as outrage continues its scream
as clicks, whistles and pulsed calls fade

Another echo's gone

 



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Reviewed by John Herlihy
Reviewed on May 8, 2023
Such an interesting and creative approach to a subject that perhaps many people know nothing about, the plight of whales. We don't normally think of these massive and powerful animals being vulnerable, but vulnerable they are in this day and age. Finely presented.

Reviewed by Ronald Hull
Reviewed on May 7, 2023
A poignant reminder of the plight of the whales. By using the first person you have made it human, although we don't know exactly how whales go through the experience of being harpooned, dragged and killed. Each new ship carries more technology making it easier to kill whales and harvest them.

Japan has always gathered much of its food from the sea. As global warming attacks the whales and their life cycles, starving nations will hunt them down the very last one. We have to prevent that. Intervene for them more than Greenpeace has been able to do.

Ron

Reviewed by Richard Cederberg
Reviewed on May 7, 2023
It is brutal heartless work. And a bloody testament to what humans do in the name of economics. Perhaps remote-controlled drones will help in this fight to stop the slaughter. I just don't know. It's a tough subject to contemplate. An emotional piece, Odin. Peace.... rlc


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