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Rock and Bone Simplicity

by Odin odin@aflx.com — Read all 3,869 poems by Odin odin@aflx.com

If only we were of more learned knowledge regarding harmony. Unfortunately, we find it difficult to communicate with nature’s forever-primitive wisdom waiting for re-discovery. (Image by 2001:Space Odyssey)

Wednesday, June 7, 2023


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Rock and Bone Simplicity


How elusive the quest
To place oneself in sync,
Wavelength to wavelength,
Response to reply.

So many agendas beg ignoring,
Those places where integrity remains suspect,
Where job,
Marriage,
Relationships,
Friends,
Acquaintances,
Eye contact,
Undeserved pleasures,
Even fantasized harmony
Portending confirmation of truth,
Are often merely layered fears
Forged in distrust.

For lest we forget,
No one promised answers,

Even as schemas know no boundaries,
The road signs always offering direction
To the many of want,
Facilitating few of need,
They nevertheless remain available.

Such goes this phenomenon of plans,
Diagrammable life,
Representation of what might be,
But rarely is,
What is intrinsically longed for,
Yet seemingly uncatchable,
Like forever morphing mercury.

Still…

So desperate are most,
Clutching to random connection,
Often without reason,
Resulting in attention from others,
That we embrace such as self-realization.

Perhaps a venture off the beaten path,
A bushwhack through the untrammeled past
Might beg consideration.

Where revisiting the child within
Will remind how infant outbursts
Conveyed rudimentary logic,
When diaper rash urgency,
Void of language,
Save scream and cry,
Defined simple organics,
A voicing in search of form.

So easy to ignore this,
Time’s simplistic message.
Reaching back toward the dawn of man
When primitive bone and stone
Drummed the truth of need,
Food,
Shelter,
Cover,
When duplicity hadn’t been invented,
When progress was preserved by raw instinct.

Today

Actuality is in questioned focus.
Our civilized regression,
This guise-in-furtherance flight
Toward make-believe escape,
Has jettisoned logic into the abyss of ignorance,
Manipulating instead today’s lie of norm
Into modern truth.

The hunt will continue
Beneath self-created imprisonment
To find that somewhere yet to objectify itself,
That place where slumbers intrinsic reasoning
Kept safe by nature’s heartbeat,
Requires nothing but simple acceptance
Of that known simply as
Ever available
Truth.

Searching minds continue,
Trusting consciousness will prevail,
Even allowing occasional laughter
Along the path where delusions entertain…

Momentarily


 



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Reviewed by Richard Cederberg
Reviewed on June 8, 2023
Great title, and a very memorable movie. Some memorable phrases in this too: "the abyss of ignorance" indeed continues to get deeper and more convoluted in this world. "self-created imprisonment" The delusional, psychoneurotic, misguided, deranged narcissists, in roles of leadership on this planet, is stunning. At least, as you posit, good laughter fulfills its duty momentarily. So thankful for it. Another thought-provoking piece. Thank you for sharing. Peace.... rlc

Reviewed by Ronald Hull
Reviewed on June 8, 2023
So much packed into this prostry. From diaper rash to delusion. Apple just released a product that will allow those who can afford it to drift off into their own virtual reality, shaping their past the way they wanted to be rather than the way it was. Very distracting and delusional.

I recall in 1968 with my grandmother in San Jose watching A Space Odyssey: 2001 on the big screen. That scene with the apes suddenly discovering tools tells me that Arthur C. Clarke believed in the concept of ancient aliens or some god providing through the monolith intelligence to the apes, creating man. In the end, when the ship computer on a mission to Jupiter reaches near singularity, the beneficent entity gives humankind "many worlds." I assume for population expansion, one of Clarke's beliefs that the human population could expand and grow exponentially throughout the near universe. Pretty heady stuff just like your offering today.

Ron


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