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Tomorrow's Human Detritus

by Odin odin@aflx.com — Read all 3,869 poems by Odin odin@aflx.com

- With so many sentient gifts ignored or abused, how dangerously close might the resultant evolutionary reality be? Might we need to pay more attention?

Tuesday, June 27, 2023


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Tomorrow’s Human Detritus


New tide’s blinking,
Sending flotsam drift shoreward
Where water depth changed by oceans’ swallow
Show decayed pylons
Once supporting boardwalk simplicity.

Sun worshipers urge summer heat
To darken lathered skin,
As abandoned Coppertone bottle
Joins ancient water’s perpetual visits
Of ebb and tide.

Gull-feathered patience gliding above
Gazes at innocent children molding sand castles,
Where Triscuit-step-paths
Meet up to draw-bridge Wasa crackers
Held secure by breadstick timbers
Cemented with sea weed’s sticky sand.

Bronze effigies awash in gull-white convenience,
History’s commemorative life lost on tempest waves
Goes unnoticed as it overlooks
The coming and going of storybook sand castles.

Adults-in-progress

Such is entitlement’s escape-to-the-sun
Where pleasure-obsessed addiction
Remains ensconced in seaside delusion,
Holding to beach days past
When beer-enhanced-love, once celebrated,
Slipped to Perrier-Jouët pretense.

Self-deception
Imbibed,
Discarded,
Becoming tomorrow’s human detritus,
Drifting aimlessly below,
Origin’s forever exhalation,
Updrafts of salty air
Seeking untainted conscious life,
Somewhere.

Anywhere.



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Reviewed by Richard Cederberg
Reviewed on June 28, 2023
Much detritus in this world. The kind you can see, and the kind you can't. I understand the gist of your thoughts and agree. A confession: The last two words you chose: "Somewhere Anywhere," hopelessly shifted my focus to the Booking.com commercial, with Melissa McCarthy and Ben Falcone. r

Reviewed by Ronald Hull
Reviewed on June 28, 2023
It's getting harder to find "untainted… life" anymore. For anywhere one goes in the pretense of exclusive separateness, the detritus keeps washing up at our feet.

Much food for thought about the way we live versus the way we should.

Ron


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