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Pretending

by Odin odin@aflx.com — Read all 3,869 poems by Odin odin@aflx.com

A recent look at more of the same. One has to wonder: Is feigning the act of living honestly rapidly becoming a pandemic? Hopefully, many will overcome the denial. (Image by Turinorodlenn)

Friday, July 21, 2023


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Pretending

 



Priming years

Pulpit dogma from lips
Caked of sanguine ploys
Rewards of blessings
Punishments of fire

Ignorance years

Media’s pickpocketing
Wanna-be adults
Working the cravings
Offering eye candy as nutrition
Relegating brains to starvation

Observing years

The agony of hunger
The drool-laden faces
Staring through pizzeria windows
Suffering fun-filled dough throwing
Like a cruel Pavlovian test

Near-death years

Central Park’s homeless
Residing atop benches darkly
Their newspaper blankets
Tucked tight around their dreams
Dancing cheek to cheek

Nightmare years

Variant dogged dreams
Reminding God’s promises
Media’s trolling for vicarious submissions
Hunger’s reality
Security’s vagrancy

Epiphany years

Prized silver spoon success
Tarnishing beneath palm tree splendor
Contemplating manicured beachfront property
Awaiting the next wave


At last craving one big enough
To wash pretension away

Restore simple desires

To better the you of you

Not the you of them

 

Reflection years

 

How sublime to find love and contentment

Through understanding want

Over desire

Knowing Imagination need not

Be pretending

But can be enlightenment

Of simplicity



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Reviewed by Richard Cederberg
Reviewed on July 22, 2023
Creative language, or the ability to communicate, (in whatever form it takes) is something I believe you inherit from all those who have gone before. Perhaps (even for authentic writers and poets) it's never just you doing the writing. It's a confluence of all your past influences, and the nourishment you receive from where you're (hopefully) grounded, that helps guide, and redirect you when you start pretending. Enjoyed this. Peace.... r

Reviewed by Ronald Hull
Reviewed on July 22, 2023
A lot to think about. Multimillion dollar schmoozing politicians gladhanding their donors while sidestepping the issues of poverty and homelessness with polarizing rather than compassion.

Makes me wonder what Bush's "Thousand points of light" have done for the poor. It's obvious that charities alone cannot solve the problem of homelessness and hunger when the largest recipients are the coffers of the politicians, making sure that the ultrariche pay little or no taxes.

Your poem also indicates that those of us who have bought the idea of conspicuous consumption and try to impress by spending rather than living simpler lifestyles are part of the problem by consuming and hoarding rather than giving generously to those in need.

Ron

Reviewed by John Herlihy
Reviewed on July 22, 2023
A perfectly crafted poem replete with insightful images that mark the sign of our times. Love especially the hopeful final stanza. Eloquent.

Reviewed by Diana Legun
Reviewed on July 21, 2023
Enlightenment of simplicity, a concept worthy of patterning one’s life after were it not so difficult to do in this complexified material world. The denial mentioned in the caption underneath this incredibly simplistic powerhouse of an image, seems to point towards ‘simplicity’ and ‘honesty’ as those traits which are denied by way of pretense. This processional progression of the species is both garnished and stripped according to the stages, and its details are fascinating, even when each stanza is read backwards. ~~ djl


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