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· The Kite That Would Not Bow

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· Truth is One


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Paper Boat Passage

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I remember this time of year most acutely, a time when my adoptive parents, one after the other, were with such confusion and disappointment in their eyes as they peered out the windows of their rooms. ( Image by ottawalife)

Monday, August 28, 2023


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Paper Boat Passage


So often…
like the origami boat of youth,
many find themselves floating about,
seeking streams and rivers leading
to an ocean of completeness,
trusting that more bobbing and weaving
around the currents of resistance,
waves from life’s unexpected currents
will somehow abate.

Some…
staring forth from the windows
of time’s conciliatory nod,
their aging’s quiet moments resonating.
reverberating youthful memories,
(a proud parent’s encouragement to fantasize,
“climb aboard your paper vessel, darlin’…”)
where navigation down the gutter of imagination,
maneuvering around the islands
of discarded soda cans,
unfinished burgers,
an occasional rock or two,
finally coming to rest
atop a drift of grass and leaves ,
still intact,
seems so... wonderful.

Such moments
can still at times,
seem so joyous,
these spawning dreams
of adult adventure assured will come.

Such proud parents, they were.

Yet…

Adulthood never was such a “darlin’” sail,
or successful docking,
or with adoring embraces from all on shore.

How illusive he learned life’s shorelines were,
are,
and continue to be.

Like a landmass on the horizon,
seeming one minute to appear,
then disappearing the next.

So life went,
goes,
endures…

He continues to reside
among so many lost voyagers adrift,
staring out their own portholes,
longing for that which most likely
is still but the tenacity of a paper boat,
cascading toward…

Nevertheless…

Like him,
so many still smile,
especially when their ship seems to be coming in.


 



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Reviewed by Ronald Hull
Reviewed on August 30, 2023
It seemed to be a bit repetitive but the idea of what they were looking for… Was it an end to the summer drought this time of year so their crops would come in? That kind of left me hanging until that wonderful last line that seemed to pull everything together.

Ron

Reviewed by Diana Legun
Reviewed on August 29, 2023
I especially appreciate these writings of yours that come from the place of aged maturity.
“…aging’s quiet moments…” of “..youthful memories.” The placement of the origami boat being in the ‘city,’ was visually received, a good setting variation from the clear-water, grass-lined country stream. The starkness of having experienced, and now being, an elder staring out the porthole, remembering simpler, more innocent days, is an actual ‘gift,’ as I have my own version of the paper boat, a willow tree’s whip-like branches making music in the wind, and that is the gift of this poem — your paper boat to my willow tree, and each reader’s own ________. Thank you again* ~~ djl


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