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· Sediment Within the Soul

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Symphony of Love Revisited

by Odin odin@aflx.com — Read all 3,869 poems by Odin odin@aflx.com

Some believe we don’t find love, love finds us. Perhaps its elusive quality is due to the guises it so effectively presents. Too few understand “to be love” is to go without want. Reviewing some memories spawned this exploration.

Tuesday, September 5, 2023


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Symphony of Love Revisited


Shimmering whispers urge forth,
a beginning seeks release from darkness,
the voicing of struggle proclaims arrival,
like miniature cymbals of heroic announcement,
the cries of emergence clash with air and space
once portending grace,
now a melody's genesis.

The matrix of parent/conductor
anxiously hum nursery rhymes
through white enameled side-rails,
vertical portals to unfettered ears
absorbing even when sleeping,
evolving into passion's invitation.

The precious first movements
grow from those one-finger dissonant phrases
sometimes pounded upon the black and white landscape
merging a piccolo's infant smile
with paternal contra bass and cello echoes of the maternal.

Remembrances of tinkling keys
soon enjoin its pure and simple
with conflicted movements of trial and error,
the inevitable adagio of growing up.

Hence forth,
the scherzo's innocence of adolescence
crescendos into threatening measures
where layered tones of choices
present challenge,
chaos,
counterpoint of independence,
or sympatric harmony.

The family of voicing
developing love's thematic material,
rhythms,
keys,
and more complex harmonies
create the free fantasia,
a coalescing of passion's varied workouts.

Arriving at life's movement of peace,
that place of elderly consonance,
its strings worn thin,
the weight of its chambered containment
housing now but the waning echo of a baby's chorus
rests forth its closing bars.

Its shimmering whispers
float one last wave of the baton,
stirring life's ethereal essence
into heroic higher bonding.

Such is love’s symphony.



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Reviewed on September 6, 2023
Such beautiful refections and expressions of love, Odin.

Reviewed by Ronald Hull
Reviewed on September 6, 2023
Once again, you have used a lifetime to create your symphony of love through experiences gathered while dopamine flooded the brain thinking that love was real and tangible even when it wasn't.

It is interesting that you believe the quiet essence of old age to be synonymous with love. Lately, I've noticed that aging has brought back to me many lovely tunes from the past I remember, but with very few lyrics from them. They make my going to sleep time a labor of love like writing is. Ofttimes when immersed in writing I feel none of my aches and pains and lose track of time. Just like lovemaking, but in a different way in the symphony of life.

Ron

Reviewed by richard cederberg
Reviewed on September 6, 2023
A painstakingly cogitated piece, that uses a unique mode of insight to shed light on one man's insights into living, aging, and the joy, sorrow, fickleness, serenity, and exaltation of human love. A piece that plays in this readers mind like mood medicine. I remember reading this 5-6 years ago. A good one to repost. Yes indeed. Excellent work. Amo Ergo Sum. r


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