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Books
· Perceptions

· ECHOSIS

· Prosetry at Work

· Said and Unsaid - Vol 1

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· Patience Waning

· Ladle Lines (A prosetry memory)

· A Gentle Man

· Pacing Love's Journey

· Gratitude

· A Sticky Conversation

· Blazing Now and Then

· Vulnerable Captivity

· The Kite That Would Not Bow

· Time


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· Desperation Breeds Desperation

· Preference Manifest

· Innocent Guilt

· Barbed Isolation

· A Place...

· Sanity's Loss

· Organs Anonymous

· Fatuous Beyond Absurdity

· Truth is One


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· The Life-long Pernicious Evil

· Cherishing Sounds of Silence

· Understanding the Unexplainable

· Reality of Another Kind

· Finding Trust Again

· Aromalicious Memories

· A Jungle-rain Pastorale

· Sediment Within the Soul

· Life's Enormous Green Chest

· Roadkill Memoriam

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Scars' Transient Nature

by Odin odin@aflx.com — Read all 3,869 poems by Odin odin@aflx.com

Time is truly a paradox, allowing erosion even as it heals, its endgame embraced by unknown horizons. (Image by pinterest)

Tuesday, October 3, 2023


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Scars' Transient Nature


Our surface etchings,
how quiet the disfiguring moves,
skin's tenacity ever protective,
even as tissue of smiles eventually
becomes but canyon topography of time’s erosion.

Leisurely proceeds the savage healing beneath,
bombarded with Nature's unexpected,
aging platelet’s shift,
taking their time,
knowing we wait,
uplifting sorrows once buried,
making molten the flow
that once remained contained and hardened.

Whether by deed,
word,
or thought,
wounds begin as opened expressions,
their potential scars knowing patience
an art rendering of the often-dreaded kind.

And then...

The day finally arrives.

 
Scars begin to shrivel.

 
Age becomes its own embrace.

 
The earned chameleon friendship cycle complete.

 
The rebirth of crying again erupts,
exposing the wrinkled baby of another kind

awaiting protection of innocence.

This time,
with the long sleep
poised at the threshold,
awakening resigns its prerogative.

 
Smiling muscles mix with sadness,
completing the resonant mantle,

becoming complete in Man’s oneness

with Nature’s cyclic infallibility.



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Reviewed by Ronald Hull
Reviewed on October 3, 2023
Hardly any better description of the aging process. Shown primarily in our skin, our largest organ that continually repairs itself, its many layers right up until we die. But it isn't the skin that kills us, it just reveals what is going on underneath like your prosetry so elegantly describes.

Our skin is but cells with hardened surface to withstand the sun's radiation, scrapes and tears—cuts--the flesh is heir to. In each cell connected to other cells is made up of elements and compounds. The compounds are made up of elements. The elements are made up of atoms. And the atoms are made up of the crazy, squiggly and irrational quarks making everything above them subject to change, wanted or unwanted, generally resulting in a loss of life by way of transformation into another form of life at the subatomic level.

Very little to fight this process, so why do we fight it so much?

Ron

Reviewed by Richard Cederberg
Reviewed on October 3, 2023
The poetic/literary community was once (in past years) a wellspring of mind-freeing, soul-vitalizing gems of language. Like Soren Kierkegaard's: "what labels me, negates me." Or C.G. Jungs: "The privilege of a lifetime is to become who you truly are." Or Ezra Pounds: "We should read for power. Man reading should be man intensely alive. The book should be a ball of light in one's hands." And though these examples are many, let me just say this.... There is an inescapable and humorous irony associated with pursuing authentic poetic construct and authorship. One must be deeply introspective to reveal the gift, ferociously disciplined to develop the gift, diligent and fearless to display the gift, and forever hopeful that upon the revealing there is some understanding and acceptance. Your work always stimulates thought. Thank you for that. Stay fluid. r


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