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Whispering Trampled Hope

by Odin odin@aflx.com — Read all 3,869 poems by Odin odin@aflx.com

It’s 2023 and another reflection of today’s NY subway and its ever-increasing magical presence as more and more unexpected creative moments catch travelers off guard.. (Image by vidblocks)

Thursday, November 2, 2023


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Whispering Trampled Hope

City’s almost quiet hour
awaits lone wanderer’s entrance,
thespian remorse moving
down concrete steps from stage door exit,
through heavy fog escort,
across gum blotched pavement
where cigarette butts
and fast food wrappers hitch rides
atop the fetid mist rising from manhole covers
of the Great White Way.

Always at the ready,
Broadway signs of joy
glittering false hope,
vying for center stage,
Time Square’s perpetual opening night
like no other.

Above muted train rail echoes,
bodiless street crossings beckon,
framed overhead by millions of watts,
a metropolis of man-made stars,
sparking delusional bribery,
even for a vacuous 2:00 AM.

At subway’s entrance,
melancholy wafts upward
from underground platforms,
Miles-like blues whispering trampled hope
drift across collapsed sleepers,
crashed believers,
staggering deceivers,
embracing Escher’s upside down landscape,
surreal longing for the rapture,
freedom,
disappearance of pain.

Down the stairs of dank air,
white tiled walls defiled with spray can and marker
house the tunnel winds that forever reek of decay,
rats, roaches, many things once alive,
now but centuries-old-remnants of what was,
what still is late night’s weigh station of despair.

At platform’s edge,
trumpeter leans against pillar
his instrument crying a guttural wail,
lamenting many who’ve passed,
for all who might pass.

From the Bard’s world above,
lone wanderer makes staircase entrance
from the ubiquitous world stage of expression,
where all of humanity,
merely actors.

Local Train enters station,
stops and opens doors.
Wanderer pauses before trumpeter…
gently places five dollars in his cup,
steps into subway car.
Movement again as the train’s electrical hum
blends with the horn’s lonely yowl of gratitude.

Train disappears into tunnel’s darkness.

Sudden silence.

Loneliness catches its breath.

Hope’s timbre continues.



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Reviewed by Ronald Hull
Reviewed on November 3, 2023
I have found you very vivid description of the subway and its enduring ambience true of the many movies I've seen filmed there. And the trumpeter at 2 AM still has the possibility of enough cash for the next fast food meal, if not a place to sleep during the night off the street.

I only rode the subway once on a very warm day before Thanksgiving. Unfortunately, I didn't see any street performers on the platforms, but I believe that it is very common today for groups to tussle over who gets to perform on a particular platform and time.

I have seen street performers in San Antonio and New Orleans and always make sure that I gives them something for their giving me the joy of their talent in such an open forum as the street with people walk by uncaring even though they are listening.

Ron

Reviewed by Richard Cederberg
Reviewed on November 3, 2023
Very visual. IMO another of your insights that would make a good film short. The idea of the musician's soul expressing his thanks with the notes he's playing is golden. Well done. Thanx 4 sharing. r


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