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Reflecting Windows

by Odin odin@aflx.com — Read all 3,869 poems by Odin odin@aflx.com

Perhaps the last vestige of pure respect for Nature’s laws governing humans, animals and plants in America were the indigenous people who met the Mayflower.

Saturday, December 2, 2023


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Reflecting Windows

 

From high above us

How bombastic the scaffold retching

As lightheaded, tethered by ropes hold purchase twenty floors up

As the daring squeegee away the grime and smear

Of a December chill.

 

With no way of opening the fixed windows

Mirror-tinted shades of clouds

Peering down like steads

Of a Roman chariot race

Their nostrils pump the threatening air earthward.

 

Like a Dali painting of absurdity

Occupants of dark office cubicles

Remain bent over their marvelously insipid work

Trusting that slavish servitude will keep their lives lit

 

Skywalkers across the way wave

As window washers take their lunch break

Of bologna and cheese sandwiches

While roiling clouds unleash ancient whip-cracking from above

Melodiously merging with echoes of long-ago Native American people’s chants

Reminding all that nature knows well the game of survival

Few walking the concrete canyons below comprehend


 

 



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Reviewed by Ronald Hull
Reviewed on December 4, 2023
These lofty window washers certainly have a view of the canyons like no other, but they can't escape the honking cabs and sirens blaring far below making the city chatter far from the ancient forest quietude.

And do they hear the loud thump! As some migrating bird mistakes the reflection in the glass façade to be a fellow flock mate only to crash onto himself and plummet to his death and the rats below.

Or from his lofty nest atop a gargoyle on a century-old building the Peregrine falcon, accustomed to the turmoil of sound and people on the ground dives at suicide speed to catch a pigeon off guard in mid-flight and then, carry the bird to his waiting offspring and mate for life to sustain them another day in the big city, now their home.

Ron

Reviewed by John Herlihy
Reviewed on December 3, 2023
So accurately described on this fascinating topic. When living in Doha for six years, I lived on the 20th floor of a 30 story building, a residence hotel, and every few months, used to watch the window washers pass down from on high on their meagre scaffolding to wash my (permanently closed) windows, How I always marvelled at the sight of their courage and hard work in that heat. Unbelievable.

Reviewed by E Phillips
Reviewed on December 3, 2023
Few can capture the mood of a city, or only a part of it, as you do. Your tour de force of chariot races, Dali paintings, and Native American chants rising above concrete canyons from a reservoir of dreams, and experiences, and storytelling that are the footprints of the quintessential poet at work. And I am better for it. Bravo!

Reviewed by Diana Legun
Reviewed on December 2, 2023
Visual smorgasboard in this writing, and I marvel over your ability to both write of ‘loving’ the City, {your descriptions of parts of living in New York} at the same time ‘seeing’ its pit-like qualities. This one mixes the two respects into a reflection, with the sky a main character. I love that. One word made me laugh out loud, and that was the word ‘insipid,’ but only because it was so utterly ‘perfect’ for being a next door neighbor to the word ‘slavish.’. I previously did time with clerical working on Floor #36 in San Francisco; I know of what you speak. Honor is given to the truth of ‘indiginous’ here in ‘Reflecting Windows,’ thank you for that part of the whole. ~~ djl


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