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Aging Mist

by Odin odin@aflx.com — Read all 3,869 poems by Odin odin@aflx.com

Fortunate are we who can anticipate passing not as an ending but as a portal into an unknown that suggests creation’s continuum into cosmic unknowns is eternal. (image by shijil619)

Monday, June 17, 2024


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Aging Mist

 

How telltale this vapor of emotion.

 

To be the toddler with repeated pratfalls,

The tearful eyes filling with the plea.

Kiss it better.

Mama?

Papa?

 

From mist-infused relationships,

Where teacher,

Classmate,

Young love

All introduce befogging of another kind,

Often obscuring growth to the next level.

 

But…

 

Decades past will have served growth well,

Sometimes with hard lessons

Mystifying the eyes of discovery,

While inevitably

Evaporating into watermarks of learning.

 

How restless life’s misty events,

Catapulting the heart and mind

Forward into the denser overcast

Maturity designed to withstand

The more age-related blunders,

The ones that shed doubt,

Often driving life into hiding

As the shadowy ghostlike haze

Envelopes the mind,

The heart,

And leaves one beholden

To darkness,

Faith,

Trust,

And the next deep breath

 

Living fully

Rejects the cataracts of cessation,

Opting instead

To fuse all the senses

Into one glorious

Celebration,

As the fog from afar

Pauses,

Gives time,

Allows one to determine the final effort,

The one that may instigate clarity of appreciation,

Translucency of emotional acceptance,

Lucidity of anticipation,

And belief that there is reward

Beyond the aging mist.



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Reviewed by Ronald Hull
Reviewed on June 20, 2024
I'm sorry, but this one was a bit too foggy for me. The image was great. Showing someone imagining worlds far beyond with great anticipation.

But the premise of the poem that there is something besides imaginary ghosts appearing in the mist of the mind in old age will result in something wonderful after passing through seems more like wishful thinking than reality.

I like your earlier prosetry where you refer to our atoms being reused for another purpose in the future of time beyond all comprehension. I only regret that I'm not living long enough to see how AI or even extraterrestrials help us solve all of our problems here on our little blue dot. Something that I know will happen when we grow up and stop wandering around in the swamp of smelly vapors we call mist.

Ron

Reviewed by Richard Cederberg
Reviewed on June 19, 2024
Some telling images: "vapor of emotion" "mist-infused relationships" "befogging of another kind" "shadowy ghost-like haze" "Clarity, translucency, lucidity," all of these images and words point at someone desperate for some kind of a creative break-through. You are a seeker, Kent. Much more so than the growing hordes who think they've already arrived. Enjoyed the honesty. Here's to finding the next pure clear-watered spring. Peace.... rlc

Reviewed by John Herlihy
Reviewed on June 17, 2024
Some interesting phraseology in this one that captures the imagination:

Mystifying the eyes of discovery
Evaporating into watermarks of learning
blunders . . . often driving life into hiding
Beyond the aging mist.

Ah yes, word clusters that stir the imagination of the reader.

Reviewed by Diana Legun
Reviewed on June 17, 2024
I so enjoy your pieces treating the subject of stages of life, Odin. The line that rings the loudest for me in this is “Translucency of emotional acceptance,”. That one makes me work on it in a way Pat Conroy wrote of in The Prince of Tides: “He rolled the thought around in his mind like a lozenge.” Like that ~~ djl


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