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Shrinking World

by Odin odin@aflx.com — Read all 3,869 poems by Odin odin@aflx.com

There is a special gratitude that can accompany one’s aging process if one continues seeking out the joy of living.

Friday, July 26, 2024


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 Shrinking World

 

 

Seductive is seclusion’s condensed surroundings.

 

How sensitive one’s awareness

In this self-imposed solitude.

 

What a roar the dripping faucet expresses.

How bright the reflection of early light on my coffee cup.

The keyboard of my voice is comforting,

Like the remembered touches of my youth.

 

Anxious is the scent of aloneness,

Where gradual body atrophy

Reminds one of yesterday’s grandparents.

 

With eyes open,

One sees the walled-in surroundings of today

Mingle with the open wilderness of yesterday.

 

How humbling is this inescapable conundrum of time,

With it’s often slow recall of sadness,

And its rush of joy to be alive.

 

One’s world may get smaller in aging,

But, oh how an experienced life can keep one searching for fresh moments

As smaller pleasures deliver smiles of newly discovered happiness.

 

So goes the maintaining of purpose

In this gradual erosion of mortality.

 



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Reviewed by Diana Legun
Reviewed on August 2, 2024
From the very first line, this unfolds rich awareness and resonance beneath the reading glasses of my maturing eyes. It gleams with truth and reality. The two lines, “How sensitive….” had me sitting up in the very same awareness as your ‘awareness’….identifying with each subsequent line. The artistry of your language is felt in the details you choose to see and describe; i.e., “…reflection of early light on my coffee cup.” That imagery has the power to have me feel like I’m sitting there seeing it myself, and hearing your dripping faucet. And yet…the one line that made my eyes open even wider was this one: “The keyboard of my voice is comforting,”. I just love that expression, and that it is a reminder of youth. Even as our faces morph into road maps of where we’ve been, our voices are most often still very recognizable. Stunning piece of writing (write what you know) . . . and you do! ~~ djl


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