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Books
· Perceptions

· ECHOSIS

· Prosetry at Work

· Said and Unsaid - Vol 1

· 3 WAY MIRROR


Short Stories
· Patience Waning

· Ladle Lines (A prosetry memory)

· A Gentle Man

· Pacing Love's Journey

· Gratitude

· A Sticky Conversation

· Blazing Now and Then

· Vulnerable Captivity

· The Kite That Would Not Bow

· Time


Articles
· War and Peace

· Desperation Breeds Desperation

· Preference Manifest

· Innocent Guilt

· Barbed Isolation

· A Place...

· Sanity's Loss

· Organs Anonymous

· Fatuous Beyond Absurdity

· Truth is One


Poetry
· The Life-long Pernicious Evil

· Cherishing Sounds of Silence

· Understanding the Unexplainable

· Reality of Another Kind

· Finding Trust Again

· Aromalicious Memories

· A Jungle-rain Pastorale

· Sediment Within the Soul

· Life's Enormous Green Chest

· Roadkill Memoriam

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Whisper of Endurance

by Odin odin@aflx.com — Read all 3,869 poems by Odin odin@aflx.com

A Hard look at Nature and we really need to stop whining how tough living is.

Sunday, October 6, 2024


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 Whisper of Endurance

 

Pa Patience breathes in the moments when the world slows.

Like a seed deep within the soil waiting for the sun’s nurturing,

It knows little of the day’s rush.

 

Glacial peaks often stand tall,

Formed by the patience of rain, snow and wind,

Never hurried,

Yet never still.

 

A river excavates its path, not by force, but with the steady carving

Of water’s freedom to roam,

One of Nature’s nomad travelers.

 

Consider…

 

Light years away kinds of endurance,

Stars in the night sky radiating with light that took eons to reach us.

 

Perhaps the epitome of patience is

The heart garden where flowers of quiet strength

Hold firm their roots in the soil of time.

 

 



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Reviewed by John Herlihy
Reviewed on October 7, 2024
I have also written multiple times on the idea of patience because I think it is one of those human traits that needs to be further nurtured, especially in this day and age when everyone wants instant gratification and are not willing to wait for the simplest thing, much less something of glacial proportion.

The Islamic traditions put it succinctly in a direct quote from the Quran: "Sabre jameel". Patience is beautiful im much the same way as you have delineated in your insightful poem.

Reviewed by Ronald Hull
Reviewed on October 7, 2024
A beautiful view of the way nature perseveres. The last stanza is so reflective of the way things are.

In spite of all of our efforts, the soil in our garden becomes like concrete dry summer and no longer has the nutrients that it needs to provide good garden vegetables and fruits.

However, while leaving it fallow recently many non-native food sources are being planted by birds and thrive with a little water, giving us far more food, like wild spinach and papaya than we ever could have had we tried to plant and cultivate them.

Ron


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