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Trailblazing in Perpetuity

by Odin odin@aflx.com — Read all 3,869 poems by Odin odin@aflx.com

As my late father’s birthday is around the corner (he would have been 114 tomorrow) I’m reminded once again just how unforeseen the evolution of chance, the forever intimate confusion and suspense life provides. Wishing not to pontificate, I couldn’t help but ground some entrenched pondering of late as more and more of a world in chaos continues to fill the contemporary discourse. (Image by Odin AI)

Saturday, December 7, 2024


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Trailblazing in Perpetuity

Astride his father’s shoulders
Like a double-decker bus
There was always what his father saw
And the child’s gaze beyond
They learned together
What their senses taught them of reality

There were so many hills his father climbed
The boy seeing what was ahead on horizons
The father focused on firm footholds
Following trusted forest imprints
Relying on tradition’s habitude

This father is long gone now
This boy of shoulder wonderment
Has grown wise of rugged tracks
Leading to this day

A stormy December afternoon
Staring through a digital lens
Atop a mid-town observation deck
The boy now a man
Stares out across a skyscraper landscape
A winter tundra his father never had to pioneer

Realizing the Now of navigating
Relies little on the primitive tracks
When plant
Animal
Rock
Weather
Parts of the undeniable whole
Determined shelter and food
Life and death

Wisdom
The oft-missing essence of success
Impacts little of today’s aspiration
Whose awareness respects not learned footprints
Nor hardened determination
To stay true to a right direction
Instead…

All too often
Success honors but bushwhacked obstacles
The opportunity to conquer any and all
The razed aside
Inert and live
Banished and dead
Leaving many to query
What lens can sharpen that which isn’t there?

Today exists, but yesterday’s ethereal presence
Once preceded by veracious footholds/handholds
The resplendent oneness of nature’s vast inner connection
Now all but buried beneath
A stumbling culture’s duplicitous steppingstones

Tracks lead precariously to penthouse suites
Where an eagle's nest is but a Google reference
A redolent library source of often ignored history
Reminding a father’s boy
Staring through glass-layered revelation
What decisions need pondering past momentary reward
That Nature’s swirling white layering

The once wilderness of discovery
May be foreshadowing avalanche forces
Unrestrained in their ability to bury man

Pulling his eye away from the telescope
He considers a wind gust
Lifting snow daring not to confront the ground
Choosing instead to swirl
To levitate with perhaps man’s exhausted currents from below
Struggling to rise through waning memory
Trajectories of so many devoted fathers
Trusting honest trailblazing would never disappear

Fortunately

Like the cyclic snows from on high
Rising temperatures initiate their own revolution
Endings return to beginnings
Nullifying load and weight

Time’s undaunted sagacity knows
Once civilization’s latest aspiration expends
Creation knows no better
Than to invent new trails
New boys on father’s shoulders
Tomorrow’s then and now
Again

 



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Reviewed by Ronald Hull
Reviewed on December 8, 2024
What a joy to go hiking on your father's shoulders! Since Roger and I were twins I don't recall dad ever carrying us on his shoulders although he could still take us both on and beat us when we were 20.

But he was no good at navigating, or as your a metaphor intends, my way forward in life. He told us not to do what he did but to seek education.

I was born with good navigation. Only recall getting lost once, on a deer hunt in an area of marshy swamps and small stands of trees all looking alike. I guided myself by landmarks rather than following trails. Got lost a couple of times in my but it turned out for the best.

Ron

Reviewed by John Herlihy
Reviewed on December 7, 2024
A lengthy treatise on the shifting sands of the way of the world. Through the generations, whether the child on the shoulders, or the father's shoulders supporting the child, we move into the future of different worlds, changing now faster than they have ever changed in the past. Where it is all headed only the future will reveal.


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