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Shelf Life

by Odin odin@aflx.com — Read all 3,869 poems by Odin odin@aflx.com

Most of us pay attention to shelf life and expiration dates on the food we buy,
But many ignore the care and preservation of our body parts for a long and sustainable life.(Image by Odin AI)

Saturday, March 8, 2025


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 Shelf Life

Like a physical exam,
We open our grocery bag,
Place our refrigerated goods on shelves,
Our Frozen items in the freezer,
Our misc. canned and packaged items in a cupboard,
Knowing there’s only a limited amount of time
For the shelf life of your day’s purchase.

The doctor reminds us that the anatomy
Is impermanent,
An ephemeral journey
Whose shelf life reminds us
That transience is a part of life’s beauty.

We are reminded that the eyes capture fleeting moments,
Giving stimulation to the soul,
And applying the impressions onto
The mind’s canvas of memories.

One’s ears are with a lasting sojourn for most,
Allowing vibrations like layers of frost on a refrigerator’s shelf,
Arresting hands that craft,
Touch,
Hold,
Sculptured appendages of reality
Inevitably leaving traces in their movement’s wake.

The feet are examined for longevity’s limit
As blisters of age
Hasten care.

And oh,
How we cater to our skin,
Like our often carefully wrapped fresh-cut protein,
Whether from four-legged beasts,
Feathered foul,
Or the golden encasement
Of many a food source of the deep.

Our skin usually has an extended shelf life,
Albeit etched with the lines of experience’s toll,
While still maintaining a protective barrier,
A map not unlike
The wrinkled crystalline map
A frozen food item may share.

A check of the bones,
The framework of one’s existence,
Supporting and enduring
With its silent sentinels of strength
Giving special attention to the heart,
One’s rhythmic life pulse,
That relentless drum that knows well
The quiet
And the thundering
Reminder it can
Give to the testament of time’s passage.

For…

Just as one is concerned with food’s expiration date,
So too, we remind ourselves that the heart is mankind’s lifeline

Circulating longevity’s irrigation to all of a human’s shelf-life realities. 

 



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Reviewed on March 10, 2025
When we are young, many of us never think about guarding our health but as we age it becomes a necessity. Well penned, Odin.

Reviewed by John Herlihy
Reviewed on March 9, 2025
Such an interesting symbol, this idea of "shelf life". We never think of it in terms of our selves, yet it is true. We all have a kind of shelf-life. Many years ago, when I was in my mid-twenties, I made a commitment to a running/gym/tennis routine that I have stuck by and committed to over the years into my 8th decade (I will be 80 this week!) This commitment has paid off, I had a routine doctor's check-up last month, but the medical team wasn't excited because there was nothing wrong with me and they saw not means of exploitation. They took blood but didn't respond or send me the results. I had to call weeks later and ask for it. So, yes, an important reminder, Odin, that we all have a self life and we need to pay attention to it.

Reviewed by Diana Legun
Reviewed on March 8, 2025
Ron’s clever comments were fun to read, and his last line, “…fully aware of my misgivings” is how many people may feel in contrast to this mindful tribute to the value of our physical forms. I like the line: “Whose shelf life reminds us/That transience is part of life’s beauty.” By the time I get to the ‘heart’ part of this writing, I am feeling like making more effort to take walks each day because when I skip, I am “…fully aware of my misgivings.” Our ‘vessels’ that take us through this material world do warrant respectful treatment. Green tea with honey for me* ~~ djl

Reviewed by Ronald Hull
Reviewed on March 8, 2025
Food for thought. And action if people are smart. But the secret lies with those who have lived over 120 getting Social Security like President Trump announced. ; -)

Seriously, noticing how long some of the survivors of the concentration camps have lived, I think that being deprived to that extent for a period of time in anyone's life makes the body super efficient for those who survive. But I wouldn't recommend it as an influencer of that sort of thing.

But we all know what we should do to live long. When I became paralyzed at 20, I knew my life would be shortened. But a combination of being frugal and not buying expensive harmful food as well as always taking the hard way rather than the easy way to go… the stairs rather than the elevator… has lengthened my life well beyond other paralyzed friends long gone.

I am healthier than my twin brother, but my provider has lately been indulging me in food that I never should eat but she gets as gifts and I hate to see things go to waste, so they are going to mine. It may shorten in my life to take on this duty of having a clean plate and consuming too much dubious shelf life but I'm fully aware of my misgivings.

Ron


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