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The Dreaded Last Step

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A press release on landmine casualties in Ukraine, 1 in 8 is a child.

“Beware, Mines! “ sign in the backyard of an abandoned house in a village near Izyum, Ukraine.

Thursday, May 8, 2025


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 The Dreaded Last Step

 

No warnings.

 

Even with flip-flops,

The ground’s touch

Goes unmistaken.

 

You’re only a child

But you have traveled the broken fields often.

You’ve picked flowering weeds

For your mother,

Watched them whither

In waterless bottles.

 

Beneath our shattered roof,

You’ve held your eyes closed,

Wishing for better times to happen now.

 

You’ve squatted your body

Ever so gently

To sleep

Like now

Awaiting the morning.

 

You’ve stared all night Up through hole in the ceiling

At a starless sky

And another life

Seemingly never to come.

 

You’ve not wanted to uncurl

The comfort of remaining tight together

Just you and your dream.

 

You close your eyes

If only you could take back

Your last move,

Played just a little longer

Away from that final step.

 



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Reviewed by Ronald Hull
Reviewed on May 10, 2025
A poignant reminder of the horror of war. Minefields are one of the most diabolical means of defense war has to offer. To think that children, just out for play, would fall prey to these silent killers and maimers for life.

My friend from high school, while scouting for satellite watching sites in Japan in the 1970s for the Air Force, was told once that the location that he wandered taking measurements that would be ideal for a camera site was an uncleared minefield from World War II!

Ron

Reviewed by John Herlihy
Reviewed on May 10, 2025
The image of a child moving through a broken landscape, holding onto dreams despite hardship, is so powerful. Beauty in the details, the flowering weeds, the roof with holes, the hope that lingers even in bleak circumstances. Such a timely and meaningful poem.

Reviewed by Diana Wiles
Reviewed on May 9, 2025
Absolutely heart rending what is happening…

This poem says it so gently, so sensitively, with such
total understanding and empathy…
I found it immensely moving…
The words of the sixth verse… heart breaking…
Metaphorically moving…

This is such an impressive piece of work…

Diana..🌿



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