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Walls of Secrets

by Odin odin@aflx.com — Read all 3,869 poems by Odin odin@aflx.com

Sunday, May 18, 2025


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  Walls of Secrets

 

One wall provides a beginning,

Two walls accommodate a corner,

Three walls create an open enclosure,

Four walls become a room,

Five walls mean a ceiling preventing any escape.

 

If rooms could talk,

They would likely divulge secrets,

Those experiences that are hushed,

Where exposure outside of the room

Might cause distress to one or many.

 

The walls keep the room quiet,

But walls inhale and exhale,

Their sentinels standing tall,

Their whispers vibrate the quietness

With duty to guard the secrets,

Of which,

Each room has many.

 

Like a caged eye, the imagined window in the door

Is wired as one might expect for a bird in captivity,

A prison of sorts,

Allowing the gazing forth of walls

Longing for freedom,

Even as they know their plight

Is permanence,

Save lengthy deuteriation.

 

Each fissure in the walls

Exposes the weight of time

Where cracks enjoin with stains

Accompanying the journey of solitude

With embraces of the silence

The melancholy.

 

Holding fast their guard,

The bulwarks watch the shadows dance

As the window’s light filters through

Dust motes presenting a silent ballet

Of dusk and dawn,

The celebratory nature of aging.

Oh, how they dream,

These walls of confinement,

Peering upward,

Dreaming beyond the ceiling

Where they have heard are open skies,

Wings that whisper tales of faraway lands,

Even though they stay true to their purpose,

Remaining steadfast and strong,

Embracing the room in their patient hands.

 

Some say they’ve heard the walls whisper.

 

So, what if the walls can talk? 



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Reviewed by Diana Legun
Reviewed on May 23, 2025
It is marvelous how you construct AI images to fit your writing. The ‘caged eye’ being an imagined window for the door, which closes out or opens in. I looked up ‘deuteriation‘ and felt it may have been intended ‘deterioration’? That gave me a little ionic hydrogen lesson, always welcome. :) I love the idea of the room itself being captive and at the same time enormously important as guardian of truth and consequences. The residual elevated feeling I get from this is how intimately valuable is the ‘embrace’ of a room wherein solitude and privacy nurture the soul. The way you built this room was stellar in constructing the arms that hold our confessions and replenishments, including adding the scars, stains and protectiveness. Go to your room:) ~~ djl

Reviewed on May 21, 2025
I was wondering where you were going with this after the first stanza and I’m a big ceiling starer and luckily the ceiling hasn’t talked back , the walls could tell a very interesting story though.

Reviewed by Ronald Hull
Reviewed on May 20, 2025
I often heard of wondering what the walls would say if they could talk. On the other hand, they say also great, that, or is fences, make good neighbors.

One thing is certain. Aging comes with walls that close in gradually until one feels quite confined from the freedom felt before one knew all these secrets to life now holding us back.

Ron

Reviewed by John Herlihy
Reviewed on May 19, 2025
Most people lives within the four walls of their little world, all the while they hope and "dreaming beyond the ceiling where they have heard are open skies, wings that whisper tales of faraway lands." Indeed, the walls of empty rooms no doubt can whisper of all they have witnessed of the stories of joy and sorrow that have passed within the walls. Such a relevant symbol for the experience of today's world.


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