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· ECHOSIS

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· Ladle Lines (A prosetry memory)

· A Gentle Man

· Pacing Love's Journey

· Gratitude

· A Sticky Conversation

· Blazing Now and Then

· Vulnerable Captivity

· The Kite That Would Not Bow

· Time


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· Barbed Isolation

· A Place...

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· Organs Anonymous

· Fatuous Beyond Absurdity

· Truth is One


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· Cherishing Sounds of Silence

· Understanding the Unexplainable

· Reality of Another Kind

· Finding Trust Again

· Aromalicious Memories

· A Jungle-rain Pastorale

· Sediment Within the Soul

· Life's Enormous Green Chest

· Roadkill Memoriam

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Inner-city Hugs

by Odin odin@aflx.com — Read all 3,869 poems by Odin odin@aflx.com

Browsing through the back-story for one of the characters in Echosis, I was ushered into some nostalgic living in Manhattan’s 50s 60s,70s taking in my own “Rear Window”
observations.

Friday, June 27, 2025


Poem Artwork

 Inner-city Hugs

 

 

“Momma, can I have a…”

“I’m running late

Maybe tonight.”

 

“Daddy can we go to…”

“Maybe when I come visit this week-end.”

 

Daily door shut

Daily silence

 

“Charlie, can I hold you tight?”

Woof  Woof, Woof Woof

 

How goes it?

So goes it

Video games before lunch

Stick ball around three

Cartoons run into supper

Bologna and spam on mayo spread toast

Little Wonder Bread meatballs for Charlie

Flip on the cop shows…solitary

 

The day behind me

Clocks tick

Faucets drip

Toilet keeps running

 

Fire escape beep hole adventures

NR rated neighborhood stories

Red lights come on

Spoke-wheels glitter through their turf

Dudes sportin’ funny fur coats on hot summer nights

Ice pick heels clickin’ city-slave songs

Beer bottle hail storms

Shard-sparkling drifts in gutter’s once flowing

Just another day

Just another night

 

Grandma saunters in

Complains of 3-flight routine

“Bannister’s loose,” she says

“Careful, or gonna break your butt one day,” I says

“You makin’ fun,” she says

“No, grandma. Just thinkin’ sad thoughts.”

“C’mer, child,” she says.  “You okay?”

 

Grandma’s eyes are palm trees and sunsets

Tree huts and swimmin’ holes

Wooded trails with Charlie a-runnin’

Love without rules

Love without boundaries

 

“Can I have a hug, Grandma? 

  

 



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Reviewed by Ronald Hull
Reviewed on June 28, 2025
Some great images like beer bottle hail storms. Seems like you looked in on this family.

I remember rear window very well. Jimmy Stewart always played his parts well, even in a wheelchair.

Ron

Reviewed by John Herlihy
Reviewed on June 28, 2025
A poem full of fragments of longing, isolation and survival. The daily routines, the missed connections, the solitude echoing with Charlie's loyal bark. The Line "Grandma's eyes are palm trees and sunsets" is stunningly evocative as well as beautifully symbolic. Her presence offers an example of a simple love untouched by outside conditions or schedules. Loved it.

Reviewed on June 28, 2025
This is a great line , Ice pick heels clickin’ city-slave songs. There is something magical about a grandma who does mothering right. I was lucky enough to have had two grandmothers into adulthood. I know exactly which one did it right.


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