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Books
· Perceptions

· ECHOSIS

· Prosetry at Work

· Said and Unsaid - Vol 1

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Short Stories
· Patience Waning

· Ladle Lines (A prosetry memory)

· A Gentle Man

· Pacing Love's Journey

· Gratitude

· A Sticky Conversation

· Blazing Now and Then

· Vulnerable Captivity

· The Kite That Would Not Bow

· Time


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· Desperation Breeds Desperation

· Preference Manifest

· Innocent Guilt

· Barbed Isolation

· A Place...

· Sanity's Loss

· Organs Anonymous

· Fatuous Beyond Absurdity

· Truth is One


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· Cherishing Sounds of Silence

· Understanding the Unexplainable

· Reality of Another Kind

· Finding Trust Again

· Aromalicious Memories

· A Jungle-rain Pastorale

· Sediment Within the Soul

· Life's Enormous Green Chest

· Roadkill Memoriam

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Remembering Elevator Man

by Odin odin@aflx.com — Read all 3,869 poems by Odin odin@aflx.com

The Bradbury Building in downtown Los Angeles is a much used location for productions. In thinking back over some notes and photos of several days of location filming there, I was reminded of its surreal impact. For anyone interested in viewing some pictures: http://www.yelp.com/biz/the-bradbury-building-Los-Angeles

Sunday, June 29, 2025


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Remembering Elevator Man


A wrinkled hand
rotates Time's worn handle of half circles
giving arrest to past rides awakened


Up and down
listening
hearing
never forgetting
Watch your step


Ornate iron confinement
charming for youth
insulation for some
sentencing for others


Cables retch echoed secrets within
sliding metal dregs past elevated remembrances
among whispered conspiracies
softly spoken nothings
muffled weeping
all preambles shadowed
in corners of elusive passage 


Momentary respite
gradually gives way to silent whimpers of fear
as passengers await floor-stops
fortune
reward
love
penthouse dreams


Elevator man's moist eyes rise


Arcing brass arrow above
waves Wisdom's index finger
past invisible floor thirteen
allowing today's filigree of delusions to remain patient...


for the moment
 



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Reviewed by John Herlihy
Reviewed on June 30, 2025
A fine elegy to a lost in memory breed, like a poem discovered in one of the folds of the curtain of time, with a nod even to "floor thirteen". Well done. Nostalgia personified.

Reviewed by Ronald Hull
Reviewed on June 29, 2025
Cool write. Not only reminiscent of days gone by, but a stark reminder of what the people that drove the elevators may have eavesdroped on as they conveyed so many passengers over the years up and down the many floors of the place.

Also reminded me of my stay in Manila at a four star hotel that had short people standing on boxes running the elevators.

Ron


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