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Books
· Perceptions

· ECHOSIS

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· Said and Unsaid - Vol 1

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· Patience Waning

· Ladle Lines (A prosetry memory)

· A Gentle Man

· Pacing Love's Journey

· Gratitude

· A Sticky Conversation

· Blazing Now and Then

· Vulnerable Captivity

· The Kite That Would Not Bow

· Time


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· Barbed Isolation

· A Place...

· Sanity's Loss

· Organs Anonymous

· Fatuous Beyond Absurdity

· Truth is One


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· Cherishing Sounds of Silence

· Understanding the Unexplainable

· Reality of Another Kind

· Finding Trust Again

· Aromalicious Memories

· A Jungle-rain Pastorale

· Sediment Within the Soul

· Life's Enormous Green Chest

· Roadkill Memoriam

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Twisted Longevity

by Odin odin@aflx.com — Read all 3,869 poems by Odin odin@aflx.com

We all know someone who has aged so well that even their octogenarian years reveal smooth and seeming undiminished physical endurance. Others we see as deteriating, becoming deformed images of their past. Such twisted oldness is only natural, just as it is with Northern California coastal Cedar tree population.

Saturday, August 16, 2025


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 Twisted Longevity

 

What endurance and grace

Has the cedar at cliff’s edge

As Nature leans into the wind

Revealing their limbs like arthritic arms and fingers

Stretching for something unseen.

 

Air of salt scours their bark,

Rain drills into marrow,

Yet stalwart they stand,

Knurled and exposed.

 

Each knot like a Nature bred wart

A memory,

Each twist a story,

Like the weathered folds on a grandmother’s face,

Etched by years of toil

As words of hurt and ignorance

Cutting deeper than storms of Nature.

 

Just as twisted cedar grows not straight

So goes the years of our maturing.

We learn to twist around grief and loss,

Bend beneath cruelty

And rise again

Our roots laid bare.

 

Yet…

 

Surprises never wane,

For just as the cedar resists mourning its shape,

Huming in the wind a song only the battered can hear,

So to goes the fortunate grandmother or grandfather,

Who finds not sorrow,

But a kind of wild joy

Gleaned through life’s progressive weave,

Leaving behind the mixed threads of colors building

To a completion of eternal blue

When the time is right.

 

 



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Reviewed by Ronald Hull
Reviewed on August 18, 2025
The cedar and your prosetry blend together with the rugged beauty of the place they both dwell. The ultimate testament to age breeding character.

Her brother told me yesterday that he thought I looked 60. It was a compliment I couldn't refuse as I face a life much longer than I ever thought I would.

Ron


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