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Truth Falling

by Odin odin@aflx.com — Read all 3,869 poems by Odin odin@aflx.com

As in philosophy, what you choose to believe, is. And yes, there are many truthful misunderstandings. (Image by Odin AI)

Monday, October 6, 2025


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 Truth Falling

 

 

The rain was a thousand silver needles threading the sky’s skin,

and through the trembling glass,

the old Marine watched an ant,

black as a bullet wound,

scaling the slick vertical of storm.

Its legs purchased defiance into the downpour,

as if gravity were just another battlefield to outlast.

 

Why cling to the impossible?

 

Why not fall like a leaf that’s learned to trust the wind?

The man’s fingers curled around a cup of cooling espresso,

Arthritic ache pained like old questions,

each knuckle a scar,

each sip a silent surrender.

 

The ant moved with the certainty of myth,

as if it had read the script of existence

and found no footnotes.

 

The vet, once fluent in the language of orders and oaths,

now stumbled through the syntax of survival,

his memories a muddied trench of broken metaphors.

He remembered the war not as a place,

but as a color,

the rusted red of amputated dawns,

the gray of letters never sent,

the blue of a buddy’s last breath,

folded into the flag of forgetting.

 

He tapped the glass,

a salute not to courage,

but to the absurd grace of persistence

as he stepped into the rain,

not to escape,

but to dissolve.

 

And as the clouds parted like curtains on a stage,

he realized: perhaps the ant was falling all along,

and the climb was just a beautiful lie.

 

 



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Reviewed by Diana Legun
Reviewed on October 17, 2025
The ability to write what reads as a mural is remarkable, Odin. This has a story within a story, picture in picture, and the collage is really stunning. ~~ djl

Reviewed by John Herlihy
Reviewed on October 8, 2025
I love the philosophical undercurrents exposed here. Is persistence noble or possibly absurd. Is surrender weakness or perhaps a hidden wisdom, evocative of Beckett's expression "I can't go on. I'll go on." Indeed, on we go.

Reviewed by Ronald Hull
Reviewed on October 6, 2025
That was quite a story and quite an allegory for a life of stubborn loyalty to cause really going nowhere.

The image so beautifully and perfectly fits the story.

Ron


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