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Sensory Medications

by Odin odin@aflx.com — Read all 3,869 poems by Odin odin@aflx.com

Humanity possesses the unique sensory system that often is stifled and/or subjected to pharmaceuticals that adversely alter our senses. Such a precious gift these senses unaltered. (Image by Odin AI)

Wednesday, October 15, 2025


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 Sensory Medications

 

The body…

 

Denied its orchestra,

becomes a mausoleum of muted instruments.

No scent of rain to stir the lungs,

no texture of bark to remind the skin it’s alive,

just the echo of a heartbeat trying to remember its tempo

in a room where silence is not peace, but punishment.

 

Eyes…

 

Starve in the absence of light,

like wolves pacing in a cave,

searching for the moon’s forgotten face.

 

Ears…

 

Fold inward, hearing only the hum of blood

like a distant engine idling in the dark.

 

Taste…

 

Becomes myth, a ghost of salt and citrus

that once danced on the tongue like lovers in summer.

 

Touch…

 

The most honest of senses wilts without friction,

no wind, no warmth, no weight.

 

The body begins to forget its own edges,

as if it were dissolving into the air it cannot feel.

 

Deprivation is not stillness, it is erosion,

a slow unthreading of the soul from its vessel.

 



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Reviewed by Diana Legun
Reviewed on October 17, 2025
This is a curious piece for me, Odin. One of writers’ favorite topics, the senses. I like that your introductory line mentions ‘unaltered’ being a precious gift. The contrary state of ‘altered’ can also be a plenty good gift {when I get nitrous in the dental chair}. Here, though, you have very well presented the ‘taking away’ by Rx, which anyone on anxiety Rx can relate to; the muting and vibrance reduction, energy depletion, interest dissolve, effort void. Marvelous two lines: “The body begins to forget its own edges,/as if it were dissolving into the air it cannot feel.” I value the totality of that — the vanishing so utterly complete. Great AI, too! ~~ djl

Reviewed by Ronald Hull
Reviewed on October 16, 2025
Interesting topic. Fortunately I have not altered my senses using drugs so I don't know the debilitating effects except and occasional alcohol overdose that really shouldn't have happened.

However, when your spinal cord is injured. Many senses below the head have difficulty communicating with our wonderful brains telling us what's going on down there. If the brain misinterpret what it's getting, the results can be quite debilitating in themselves.

I get autonomic reflexia when my brain perceives urination as a great danger, elevating my blood pressure to the level of stroke or heart failure, causing excessive sweating, and sometimes, a feeling like I would like to get out of my body if I could. When an EMT perceives it as shock, the condition is much worse.

Also, a very slight irritation can turn into very painful spasms like the famous athletic charlie horse unless attended to. Often dealt with by strong drugs allowing the mind to ignore what is really going on.

Ron


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