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Hidden Intimacy

by Odin odin@aflx.com — Read all 3,869 poems by Odin odin@aflx.com

It can be argued that our understanding of intimacy is confined to human to human, body to body. The expanse of unique intimacies is remarkable. (Image by Odin AI)

Tuesday, November 11, 2025


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 Hidden Intimacy

 

 

How arrives such moments,

not only in the hush of lovers’ breath,

but in the sudden recognition between a hand and the rough bark of a tree,

skin learning the patience of centuries.

 

Intimacy is the whisper of chalk against a blackboard,

the way dust clings to the air like a secret refusing to leave.

It is the silence between two strangers sharing the same bench,

their shadows overlapping like spilled ink on pavement.

 

There is intimacy in the pause before a violin bow touches string,

in the tremor of anticipation that feels like a bird hovering just above water.

There is intimacy in the way rain negotiates with rooftops,

each drop a diplomat between sky and stone.

 

Why do many confine intimacy to bodies,

when even the rusted hinge knows the closeness of door and frame,

and the moon rehearses its nightly dialogue with tide?

 

Intimacy is not possession,

it is the fragile contract between breath and silence,

between memory and forgetting,

between the eye and the sudden flight of a hawk.

 

And sometimes, it is stranger still,

the quiet recognition between a book and the dust that settles upon it,

as if the two were old friends revisiting the same story.

 

But most unexpected of all…

 

The intimacy of a spoon with the mouth of a cave,

both hollow, both waiting,

both knowing the shape of emptiness as a kind of embrace.

 



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Reviewed by Diana Legun
Reviewed on November 17, 2025
One of the most stellar attributes in your writings is how expansive is your awareness. ‘Hidden Intimacy’ reveals this. Creativity mixed with observation is a potent elixir. I value your capture of these two ingredients. I can stretch with the spoon and cave because each has a place for something. I have a place for the line: “Intimacy is not possession,” — I’ll keep that close to the vest. ~~ djl

Reviewed by Ronald Hull
Reviewed on November 13, 2025
I like your way of introducing us to more intimate thoughts than those between your bodies.

But comparing a spoon to the mouth of a cave is a little bit of a stretch for me.

Ron

Reviewed by Andy Turner
Reviewed on November 12, 2025
It is a Nerudaesque Ode.
Theological in relationship that touches, listens, waits in the sacred pulse of intimacy.

Love how it develops from lovers’ breath to nature and then to objects on to cosmic relations with a most surreal feel at the end.
My gosh “rain negotiates with rooftops,” “shadows overlapping like spilled ink,” “the whisper of chalk against a blackboard.” Evoking so much sensory.
Indeed, why do many confine intimacy to bodies?”




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