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Ambition's Taw: Epic Recasting

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People have been playing marbles and marble-like games for thousands of years. It is thought that marbles started with the cave-people playing with small pebbles or balls of natural clay. Clay balls have been found in the tombs of Egypt, they have also been found in Native American burial grounds. They have also been discovered in the ancient Aztec pyramids. In recent history, boys (and tomboys) used to play marbles in the vacant lots of the world. Circles drawn in the dirt around mibs (targeted marbles) in the center became the primary focus of every day’s awakening. Players anxiously awaited their turn to step up to the circle, curl a “taw” (sometimes called the shooter) between their fingers, take aim, and try to take all the marbles. Such has Putin’s version of the game been played for the past 3 years+ on Ukraine’s sovereign state as the war moner’s playing field. (Image by Odin AI)

Monday, November 24, 2025


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 Ambition’s Taw: Epic Recasting

  

1: The Child’s Circle

 

We knelt in dust,

knees scuffed by playground gravel,

palms sweating over a fistful of marbles,

agate swirls,

cat’s-eyes,

steelies gleaming like secrets.

 

The circle was chalked,

the rules simple:

aim,

strike,

claim.

Yet even then,

the taw was more than glass,

it was destiny rolling between fingers.

 

And now…

 

We stand back and gaze at the marbleized sand lot,

all supposedly grown up,

yesterday’s marble morphed into a planet in a world-game of nibs,

waiting to be struck again by the steely taw.

 

II. The Cosmic Marble

 

Lifted skyward,

the defending taw becomes Earth itself,

a swirling agate born of fire,

patches of green and brown,

oceans like molten glass,

clouds drifting as chalk dust over the ring of stars.

 

From orbit,

the game is vast:

continents collide like marbles,

wars erupt like ricochets,

and every child’s flick becomes a soldier’s trigger.

 

III. The War Circle

 

Ukraine lies in the circle now,

its soil cratered,

its cities pocked like scarred playgrounds.

Marbles scatter into shrapnel,

steelies fall from the sky,

missiles,

 drones,

 iron spheres of destruction clattering against the earth.

 

The taw rolls on,

guided by hands that once held laughter,

now clenched around rifles,

around casket handles.

The game is the same,

only the cost has changed.

 

IV. The Agate Against Steel

 

Yet amid the ruin,

Ukraine glimmers like agate,

its veins cracked,  

its colors bruised,

but still luminous,

still refusing to be shattered.

 

Russia flicks its steelies,

cold marbles of iron,

missiles and rods that rain like cruel toys.

But agate resists,

swirling with resilience,

its fractures becoming light,

its circle widening into rebirth

rolling forward seeking its place in the circle of survival.

 

 

 


 



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Reviewed by Ronald Hull
Reviewed on November 24, 2025
Another great allegory using the game of marbles to describe what is happening in the Ukraine war where Russia seems to hold all of the marbles to date. It is so sad to watch prosperous Ukraine being whittled away by its neighboring, not so prosperous, giant of human abuse. We keep hoping that the underdog will win.

Thank you for reminding me of some of the game of marbles terminology. There was one kid on our playgrounds who was a master at clearing the ring. I can't imagine how many marbles he took from kids playing his steely accurate game.

Ron


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