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Respecting Needs

by Odin odin@aflx.com — Read all 3,869 poems by Odin odin@aflx.com

With After-Christmas Sales in full swing and Post-Holiday Clearance mania by retailers bombarding us, the competitive forces of NEED and WANT face each other. (Image by Odin AI)

Thursday, January 1, 2026


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 Respecting Needs

 

 

Once…

 

I was want of roof.
WANT dreamed of skyline penthouses,

glass shimmering like frozen lightning.
But NEED arrived as a park bench,
its slats weathered silver by rain,
a moonlit arch of branches overhead
serving as ethereal spires of hope.
When hunger pressed in,
WANT painted rib‑eye on the air, juices hissing.
NEED answered with a dented can of Spam,
steam rising like a tiny flag of victory.

 

When…

 

My father stayed distant,
WANT reached for the thunder of his footsteps returning.
NEED offered envelopes—
creases soft from traveling miles,
ink looping like a tether across the dark.
When loneliness circled,
WANT pictured a crowd in warm lamplight.
NEED handed me music instead—
a single guitar string trembling
like a lighthouse beam across rough water.

 

So…

 

When comfort knocked with velvet promises,
WANT imagined cushions deep as summer clouds.
NEED welcomed me into Spartan rooms,
bare walls glowing with morning,
a cup, a mat,
space enough for breath to unfold.
And desire for love’s warmth, unmet,
softened under patience
until WANT’s firestorm cooled
into the steady ember of respect,
self, mutual, universal.

 

In this…

 

NEED remains the compass.
And in honoring only the essentials,
we walk lighter,
ending in a quiet place
where the lungs loosen,
and satisfaction settles
like evening light on open ground.

 



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Reviewed by Ronald Hull
Reviewed on January 6, 2026
I love how you personalized it by using your own experience. And the examples were very vivid leading me to believe that if everyone just focus on need rather than want, everyone would be better off.

I grew up in need and learned the lesson well. Finding that the best things in life were free. And many still are. But my twin brother just told me that people like his two expensive cars. They are classic European cars that he bought used and keeps immaculate. While he can only drive one at a time, his want does not drive him into buying more and more cars, like some.

Ron

Reviewed by Diana Legun
Reviewed on January 2, 2026
The lines of contrast between ‘almost none’ and ‘some’ is sharply dilineated in these words. What is alluring to me is how pronounced is the ailment and then the antidote. Instead of darkened heaviness that could weigh down this piece, each scene contains the segments of loss and gain. And the details are wonderful: from the humble bench is the appreciation of “a moonlit arch of branches overhead” being “spires of hope.” That vision took me off the bench and into the sky, looking up not down. Same with the Spam, moving from the top food chain goodness to the ‘basement’ shelf, the appreciation of “steam rising like a tiny flag of victory.” Even the wish for father presence, being a “…tether across the dark” contained, in my perception, ‘gratitude’ awareness that there were ‘envelopes.’ This whole poem smacks of thankfulness and realization — that the ‘patience’ of recognizing bare walls can glow with sun and one guitar string can make several notes and simplicity can be very satisfying once all this is evident. Kudos on this writing, Odin! ~~ djl

Reviewed by John Herlihy
Reviewed on January 2, 2026
The gap between what we want and what we need is wide indeed, as you have amply laid out there with these striking image, a theme well suited for the 1st of January, when we should take stock of our desires vs our necessities. I like your ending, with NEED as compass, allowing us to focus first on the things that we truly need and in doing so we end up "in a quiet place, where the lungs loosen and satisfaction settles like evening light on open ground." What better thought could be have on New Year's Day.

Reviewed by Richard Cederberg
Reviewed on January 2, 2026
You delineate between 'need' and 'want' effectively, and with colorful images. I relate to this on several levels, the details of which I will not belabor. I've had a motto (that has become a part of me) since I was in my early twenties: 'Form follows function.' In other words: You get what you need to accomplish what you're called to do. I suppose true contentment could come from wanting what we need, not needing what we want. And, in so doing, always having a hand extended to help others with their needs when the opportunity presents itself. Appreciate the sentiment in this. Regards... rlc


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