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Unattached

by Odin odin@aflx.com — Read all 3,869 poems by Odin odin@aflx.com

Two of my favorite quotes spawned the poem below:
“Receive without pride, let go without attachment.” – Marcus Aurelius
“The root of suffering is attachment.” – Buddha
(Image by Odin AI)

Friday, February 20, 2026


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Unattached


What advantages does an unattached thing hold,
like a stone not yet claimed by a riverbed,
a thought drifting like ash on a wind that doesn’t owe its direction to anything?


Untethered, they move with the casual confidence of sparks
flung from a fire, free to land anywhere,
free to blaze or dissolve with no one to blame their trajectory on.
A person, too, clinging not to expectation,
can feel like a helium balloon with universe for a ceiling.

But freedom makes its trade in shadows.
An unattached leaf, spun loose from the branch,
does not choose the storm that takes it.
An unanchored boat, beautiful in theory,
drifts open‑eyed into rocks that do not apologize.
Even ideas, those bright, migrating birds,
sometimes lose altitude when not roosting in a mind brave enough
to shelter them through the long winter of becoming real.


There are exceptions carved into the grain of things:
the climber unattached from the wall,
not freer, just falling;
the child unattached from a hand in a crowded place,
not liberated, just lost;
the word unattached from meaning,
all sound, no heartbeat.
Not every detachment is a wing.
Some are a severing, a silence,
a sudden hollow where a connection once breathed.

 

And there is unattached love,

the wolf that howls not for a mate
but for the echo shaped vaguely like one;
the human heart that drifts from rib to rib
searching for a pulse that mirrors its own;
the wildflower that opens for no witness but the wind,
loving nothing in particular
and therefore everything at once.
Such love is a comet’s romance with the dark:
brilliant, free, but burning itself forward
with no promise of return.

 

And so the truth curls in on itself:
to be unattached is often to be free,
like a comet, a seed, a dream,
each streaking through its own unregulated space.

 

But…

 

Anything without a tether, real or psychic,
wanders inevitably into the ungoverned corners of Nature
and the unlit basements of the human interior.
Without a thread to tie it to the world,
the unattached may become its own horizon,
glorious, drifting, and quietly lost
in the endless turning of everywhere.

  



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Reviewed by John Herlihy
Reviewed on February 21, 2026
This unattachment feels both spacious and sobering, holding freedom and vulnerability out for scrutiny. Sparks, leaves, boats, ideas, and even love itself become mirrors for the paradox of drifting without a tether. The images of the wolf’s echo and the comet’s solitary arc stays with me; they capture that haunting beauty of loving without destination. The final strobe: unattachment can illuminate, but it can also unmoor. A deeply thoughtful and beautifully balanced piece

Reviewed by Diana Legun
Reviewed on February 21, 2026
I’m seeing the Hope among the diamonds, the motherload of essence — ‘color, cut, clarity, carate’ in your literary soul, Odin. I could write pages and pages of response to your ‘Unattached.’ Cliff Notes not even possible for me on this, now my favorite of favorites because it envelopes everything that is everything, in my concept of it. Makes me think you are channeling or coming back through the portal of immaculate perception. Even the one line that puzzled me: “And so the truth curls in on itself:” — I “rolled that around in my mind like a lozenge” (excerpt from Conroy’s Prince of Tides) and settled on the truth’s nondestiny of undoing itself. Fabulous, that. Stanza #3, last three lines, would be my favorite were it not that all of them are. ~~ djl

Reviewed by Ronald Hull
Reviewed on February 20, 2026
What a beautiful concept to explore!

Nothing is permanent in this world. I wrote earlier about letting go. There's really nothing but pain in sorrow when one is too attached to anything..

Ron


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